Piper and the Magical Paintbrush
The Magic of Creativity Can be Everywhere11 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a wonderful story. The little dragon had to learn the hard. That evil old wolf tricked him. It all turned out okay for this special little dragon. That's the magic in you're pen.
Well done my friend.
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is a wonderful story. The little dragon had to learn the hard. That evil old wolf tricked him. It all turned out okay for this special little dragon. That's the magic in you're pen.
Well done my friend.
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
Whether it's ghosts fighting bad guys, detectives solving crimes, or cartoon characters with their Disney flair, your a true entertainer. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Whether it's ghosts fighting bad guys, detectives solving crimes, or cartoon characters with their Disney flair, your a true entertainer. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I am here to please, my friend. Though I do seem to fall behind on tht with some at times, but such is life. Can't please them all. I so appreciate the review and your time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Another beautiful children's story, written with clarity and imagination, and rich and vivid descriptions - and at the risk of nagging, PLEASE get these wonderful stories published. These gems need to be enjoyed by many! They all develop the world of the imaginations, and have very relevant messages.
Wendy
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Another beautiful children's story, written with clarity and imagination, and rich and vivid descriptions - and at the risk of nagging, PLEASE get these wonderful stories published. These gems need to be enjoyed by many! They all develop the world of the imaginations, and have very relevant messages.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely story about a very talented little dragon. He could make beauty with his brush and disaster when he used the witch's brush. He discovered he could also have fun with his brother and friends. He is expanding his horizons.
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This is a lovely story about a very talented little dragon. He could make beauty with his brush and disaster when he used the witch's brush. He discovered he could also have fun with his brother and friends. He is expanding his horizons.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Carol. What a beautiful story. I like the theme of the story. So descriptive and well written. You are truly a gifted writer. I enjoyed reading each section. You put so much creativity into it, I wanted to keep reading the next paragraph. Love, Brenda
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Hi Carol. What a beautiful story. I like the theme of the story. So descriptive and well written. You are truly a gifted writer. I enjoyed reading each section. You put so much creativity into it, I wanted to keep reading the next paragraph. Love, Brenda
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderfully written About Piper and his magical paintbrush, I wish you the very best with your writing. I enjoyed the fact that you were making Piper a very creative and being and I enjoy creative. People are creative things. Patricia.
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This is a wonderfully written About Piper and his magical paintbrush, I wish you the very best with your writing. I enjoyed the fact that you were making Piper a very creative and being and I enjoy creative. People are creative things. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from karenina
I can see a children's book in the making here. This is a very readable story. I know because I read it to my ten-year-old grandson and though he said he was "too old for it" he was grinning and squirming with delight.
Wondering how creativity can fit into the world can also be a very adult message. It seems humans created the atomic bomb after all.
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I can see a children's book in the making here. This is a very readable story. I know because I read it to my ten-year-old grandson and though he said he was "too old for it" he was grinning and squirming with delight.
Wondering how creativity can fit into the world can also be a very adult message. It seems humans created the atomic bomb after all.
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Oh, thank you for reading it to your grandson and I am thrilled that he enjoyed it regardless of his age. I think the message is a good one for everyone.
Smiles, Carol
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He's ten going on three. He's ten going on fifteen. You know how it goes. He loved it but didn't want me to know he loved it! Boys! So complex!
Comment from Sugarray77
These stories for children are so adorable, Carol. I love the color and pop of wonder that you incorporate into each story,. This one about Piper is charming and I loved reading it.
Melissa
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These stories for children are so adorable, Carol. I love the color and pop of wonder that you incorporate into each story,. This one about Piper is charming and I loved reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this short story about Piper. It was fun and I know children would enjoy reading it.
Your friends are waiting for you." (you can omit 'for you' it's understood)
Piper's eyes widened with surprise. (eyes widened shows surprise you don't need to say it, it's redundant.)
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I enjoyed reading this short story about Piper. It was fun and I know children would enjoy reading it.
Your friends are waiting for you." (you can omit 'for you' it's understood)
Piper's eyes widened with surprise. (eyes widened shows surprise you don't need to say it, it's redundant.)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I think your story brought the magic to life! I loved how Piper's creativity shone through. Especially when he painted such wonderful things with his magical brush. The way you described the enchanted forest and the River of Dreams is perfect. It felt like I could almost see it. I also thought it was great how Piper learned to use his creativity wisely. It made me smile when he joined his brother and friends in the end. Your story was full of heart and fun. I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the amazing work!
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I think your story brought the magic to life! I loved how Piper's creativity shone through. Especially when he painted such wonderful things with his magical brush. The way you described the enchanted forest and the River of Dreams is perfect. It felt like I could almost see it. I also thought it was great how Piper learned to use his creativity wisely. It made me smile when he joined his brother and friends in the end. Your story was full of heart and fun. I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
