Reality Fades
a Triolet poetic form19 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this poem. The picture goes well with the poem. Written well. I'm just learning about poems. I didn't realize there are so many different kinds. This is an interesting pattern
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I enjoyed reading this poem. The picture goes well with the poem. Written well. I'm just learning about poems. I didn't realize there are so many different kinds. This is an interesting pattern
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Melissa,
There are not enough sixes to give! This is a beautifully written and illustrated triolet. It's simplicity and repeated lines appeal to me. I must try this.
Sublime! Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
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Dear Melissa,
There are not enough sixes to give! This is a beautifully written and illustrated triolet. It's simplicity and repeated lines appeal to me. I must try this.
Sublime! Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Ulla
Hi Melissa. I'm so glad you're back posting your lovely poetry on a regular basis. I so enjoyed this triolet poem. It's just beautifully written and with a wonderful imagery. A hug, Ulla xcx
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Hi Melissa. I'm so glad you're back posting your lovely poetry on a regular basis. I so enjoyed this triolet poem. It's just beautifully written and with a wonderful imagery. A hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Melissa,
This is a great poem. I don't think I have every heard of a Triolet until today. It's a very interest style. The rhyme scheme is great and I like the droning bees.
I always feel bad when I mow the grass, because the bees seem to like the dandelions.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
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Melissa,
This is a great poem. I don't think I have every heard of a Triolet until today. It's a very interest style. The rhyme scheme is great and I like the droning bees.
I always feel bad when I mow the grass, because the bees seem to like the dandelions.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie Pope
Wow! Wow! Wow! Faced with your skill, I'm speechless. Seriously. You picked such a hard format. All that rhyming and repeating! I could not do it. The repeating makes it a little easier, makes for less lines to write. But then it makes it harder because they have to flow in all positions.
Remarkable job.
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Wow! Wow! Wow! Faced with your skill, I'm speechless. Seriously. You picked such a hard format. All that rhyming and repeating! I could not do it. The repeating makes it a little easier, makes for less lines to write. But then it makes it harder because they have to flow in all positions.
Remarkable job.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from judiverse
Great use of monorhyme, and excellent repeating lines. Your word choices are interesting. I especially like dappled shade. This presents a feeling of calm and peace. It is wonderful to find a place where the rushing pace of life is stayed. Excellent work. judi
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Great use of monorhyme, and excellent repeating lines. Your word choices are interesting. I especially like dappled shade. This presents a feeling of calm and peace. It is wonderful to find a place where the rushing pace of life is stayed. Excellent work. judi
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I just love this sentence of "slow, droning bees sing serenades." The buzzing of the bees may sound annoy but if it is a serenade, it must be beautiful. I only see one rhyming among all eight lines.
Well done.
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I just love this sentence of "slow, droning bees sing serenades." The buzzing of the bees may sound annoy but if it is a serenade, it must be beautiful. I only see one rhyming among all eight lines.
Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written, triolet and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all you write and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This is a very well written, triolet and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all you write and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hello Patricia. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This triolet, Reality Fades, has the proper formatting and lowers the readers into the subfoliage to where life is slowed to what is absolutely necessary.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This triolet, Reality Fades, has the proper formatting and lowers the readers into the subfoliage to where life is slowed to what is absolutely necessary.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you Bill!!
Melissa
Comment from mermaids
You have a delicious use of words that takes the reader to another place. I love the repeating line " slow droning bees sing serenades." It shows nature in action and even bees can make us feel good. Your poetic form is smooth and has an almost musical feel to it.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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You have a delicious use of words that takes the reader to another place. I love the repeating line " slow droning bees sing serenades." It shows nature in action and even bees can make us feel good. Your poetic form is smooth and has an almost musical feel to it.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review. So glad you enjoyed it!!
Melissa
