Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Bruises"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your story. It is very interesting and so descriptive. I could follow along easily. Well written and good story line.
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I enjoyed reading your story. It is very interesting and so descriptive. I could follow along easily. Well written and good story line.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Jim Wile
I love Miranda's analysis and reasoning. She recognizes that sometimes more than just logic is needed, but that being a "what if" person can lead you to the answers more effectively.
I loved the compassionate way she discusses the situation with Waylon and does her utmost to spare his feelings. She seems to know just what to say to him.
Very well-written chapter, Gretchen.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I love Miranda's analysis and reasoning. She recognizes that sometimes more than just logic is needed, but that being a "what if" person can lead you to the answers more effectively.
I loved the compassionate way she discusses the situation with Waylon and does her utmost to spare his feelings. She seems to know just what to say to him.
Very well-written chapter, Gretchen.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much, Jim. I probably watched too many horror movies in the 70s and 80s. I always get spooked in hospitals at night. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, I didn't know your story would be heading into such a tragic scene as this and I wonder who was involved in this incident, I expect you will keep us guessing for a while, I cant wait for the next instalment, a fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Oh my goodness, I didn't know your story would be heading into such a tragic scene as this and I wonder who was involved in this incident, I expect you will keep us guessing for a while, I cant wait for the next instalment, a fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Dolly. It should start rolling now. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to find out what happened to Dougie and everything. I agree with Miranda the pieces are fitting just right. Something is missing. You're doing a wonderful job writing this.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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I can't wait to find out what happened to Dougie and everything. I agree with Miranda the pieces are fitting just right. Something is missing. You're doing a wonderful job writing this.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. It should start rolling now. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Sometimes we think of people like Tomlinson as low lifes that don't deserve to live, but everybody deserves a chance to live out their lives, as long as they live it with a degree of circumspection, beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Sometimes we think of people like Tomlinson as low lifes that don't deserve to live, but everybody deserves a chance to live out their lives, as long as they live it with a degree of circumspection, beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Every life matters but if we don't punish some, more innocents are hurt. Thank you for this. Gretchen
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That's true
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is really quite creepy for Miranda. She needs to know everything and won't be content before she does. An interesting contrast with the way that Mitch thinks - a woman has much more lateral thinking and imagination, not so bound by rules, perhaps? You've set an intriguing scene now, Gretchen. We'll see Miranda come into her own. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
He could weasel out of (any) anything (redundant 'any')
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This is really quite creepy for Miranda. She needs to know everything and won't be content before she does. An interesting contrast with the way that Mitch thinks - a woman has much more lateral thinking and imagination, not so bound by rules, perhaps? You've set an intriguing scene now, Gretchen. We'll see Miranda come into her own. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
He could weasel out of (any) anything (redundant 'any')
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. This review made me smile and thanks for the editorial help. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
I had missed the previous chapter So I read that first and then this.This wax unexpected. Why should he go to thst extent?
Anyway it was brilliant and I am.gojng to think of many possibilities
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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I had missed the previous chapter So I read that first and then this.This wax unexpected. Why should he go to thst extent?
Anyway it was brilliant and I am.gojng to think of many possibilities
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much. I appreciate the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I have to agree with Miranda. I can't see Dougie doing that, he is too weak to go that far. And, if he did hammer Tomlin to death, why was he be beaten unconcious and by whom? Mitch must think of these things. This was another great chapter, my friend. Well done, can't wait to read on. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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I have to agree with Miranda. I can't see Dougie doing that, he is too weak to go that far. And, if he did hammer Tomlin to death, why was he be beaten unconcious and by whom? Mitch must think of these things. This was another great chapter, my friend. Well done, can't wait to read on. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. Fireworks are going to fly between Miranda and Mitch. I appreciate the six. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Yet another complication added to Miranda's over complicated life. Joan ( dragon poet) was in Florida on vacation, when her brother-in-law died in his sleep. If you know her drop her a line if you can. Karen
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Yet another complication added to Miranda's over complicated life. Joan ( dragon poet) was in Florida on vacation, when her brother-in-law died in his sleep. If you know her drop her a line if you can. Karen
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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I read that earlier. Thank you so much. Gretchen
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:-)
Comment from Sankey
So glad we are back on the Miranda saga again. This was a good read. I might have to check and see whether I missed a chapter. I presume Dougie beat Tomlin up or something? I now have read the previous chapter. Sorry I missed it.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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So glad we are back on the Miranda saga again. This was a good read. I might have to check and see whether I missed a chapter. I presume Dougie beat Tomlin up or something? I now have read the previous chapter. Sorry I missed it.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. It appears that Dougie was the culprit but Miranda has her doubts. Thank you for the excellent rating. Gretchen
