Whispers of the Woods
the serenity of nature6 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Superb. Good Luck. Not much else to say so I will garble to meet the required characters. kajdhvb ad;jnpfu gc[uj90qa8978f[ p[lda
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Superb. Good Luck. Not much else to say so I will garble to meet the required characters. kajdhvb ad;jnpfu gc[uj90qa8978f[ p[lda
=0-990dfhgshiakkpoadfbadosnoib
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you have your first vote!
Your words brought to life the wonders of Mother Nature and its soothing effects.
I love my walks in my pine tree , I love listening to the stream gurgle, the wind whisper . Feel the breeze caress my face ..
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Ciao mystery poet, you have your first vote!
Your words brought to life the wonders of Mother Nature and its soothing effects.
I love my walks in my pine tree , I love listening to the stream gurgle, the wind whisper . Feel the breeze caress my face ..
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from Z.H.
Very good. You follow the prompt well, but it doesn't interrupt the flow of give your writing the impression of lacking a coherent topic.
The picture brings your topic to light for those of us that aren't as alliterative.
The only thing is your line separation. I know it's part of the prompt, but it feels like you're randomly jumping to the next line sometimes.
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Very good. You follow the prompt well, but it doesn't interrupt the flow of give your writing the impression of lacking a coherent topic.
The picture brings your topic to light for those of us that aren't as alliterative.
The only thing is your line separation. I know it's part of the prompt, but it feels like you're randomly jumping to the next line sometimes.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from zanya
This poem works the guideline for the Rhyming Alliteration contest while painting a serene picture of the 'Whispers of the Woods'-the title is very effective.
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This poem works the guideline for the Rhyming Alliteration contest while painting a serene picture of the 'Whispers of the Woods'-the title is very effective.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from Barry Penfold
Very nice poem. Image totally suitable and you have met the competition requirements. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Very nice poem. Image totally suitable and you have met the competition requirements. Thanks for sharing and all the best in the contest. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures nature. Your descriptions creates a calm, peaceful atmosphere that feels soothing to read. The short lines are perfect for sharing the magical moments in nature. Such a lovely poem - great work!
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Your poem beautifully captures nature. Your descriptions creates a calm, peaceful atmosphere that feels soothing to read. The short lines are perfect for sharing the magical moments in nature. Such a lovely poem - great work!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
