Bewitchery at the Beach
a very short story5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-word story, Bewitchery at the Beach, has the proper syllable count and sends Bobbie's and my mind reeling as I imagine the actual taste of the water.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This fifty-word story, Bewitchery at the Beach, has the proper syllable count and sends Bobbie's and my mind reeling as I imagine the actual taste of the water.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Bill, for sharing my story.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Love how the image plays a part in setting up the story. Actually, have seen this sort of thing done. Thanks for sharing and all the best for the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Love how the image plays a part in setting up the story. Actually, have seen this sort of thing done. Thanks for sharing and all the best for the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Hi, Barry. So pleased you enjoyed my story and the image chosen.
Comment from Nicki.B
Oh no! She did not dare. Haha! How could she....
Poor Bobbie after being so good to help his sister. A sister full if mischief with a deiludh laugh lol!
Well done I got a cringe and a giggle from this one ha!
Nicki
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Oh no! She did not dare. Haha! How could she....
Poor Bobbie after being so good to help his sister. A sister full if mischief with a deiludh laugh lol!
Well done I got a cringe and a giggle from this one ha!
Nicki
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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I am delighted you got a "giggle and a cringe" from my story.
Comment from royowen
I guess I've never drank from a water fountain on the beach, but I have at the beach, or rather on the promenade, but they've just tasted normal, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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I guess I've never drank from a water fountain on the beach, but I have at the beach, or rather on the promenade, but they've just tasted normal, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Hi, Roy. Many thanks for sharing my story.
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Most welcome
Comment from Lana Marie
Ha ha, sister and brotherly love. The ups and downs. Helping and then teasing.
Cute picture. How many times have we said something tasted decent just to trick someone into trying something. Thanks for the laughs and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Ha ha, sister and brotherly love. The ups and downs. Helping and then teasing.
Cute picture. How many times have we said something tasted decent just to trick someone into trying something. Thanks for the laughs and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Hi, Lana. I am so pleased you found my story amusing.
