Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
Great fun and well structured within this seemingly impossible prompt. The visual is eye-catching and the message arguably very credible, a good one to reme(m)ber. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your story had me laughing out loud! The sharp wit was great. But the clever commentary is pure gold. I loved how you turned a serious statistic into such a hilarious story. The dialogue between Joe and Jim feels so natural. So it perfectly delivers the punchline. What a fun read!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
Comment from
Thesis
That was funny, but unfortunately true. You bring up a good subtle point though in identifying the priorities of people for short-term comforts, rather than long-term solutions.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025