Start Again
Goals made, and sometimes followed through3 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great new year 5-7-5 poem. Most people break new year resolutions out of the gate. I don't make them, because if I really want to do something I will.
Great job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
This is a great new year 5-7-5 poem. Most people break new year resolutions out of the gate. I don't make them, because if I really want to do something I will.
Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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That's how I feel too. I don't make them either. I started a few years ago thinking of a "word or phrase" for the year to help me focus and I didn't do one this year.
Couple years ago I had "make a difference"
Thank you for your review and comments.
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You're welcome. One of the other FS has challenged to people to write everyday. I accepted her challenge and have been writing everyday. I just wish my poems would come easier.
Comment from Janet Foor
Resolutions that we'll make or break is a great conclusion to your 5/7/5 poem for the contest. We all start with good intentions.
Well done.
Blessings and happy New Year.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
Resolutions that we'll make or break is a great conclusion to your 5/7/5 poem for the contest. We all start with good intentions.
Well done.
Blessings and happy New Year.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review and comments. I appreciate it!
Happy new year.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is true. I've come to see the changes as daily challenges though rather than some magical switch. You use very good imagery and have the correct syllables and new year's sentiment. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
This is true. I've come to see the changes as daily challenges though rather than some magical switch. You use very good imagery and have the correct syllables and new year's sentiment. Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your review and comments! Happy New Year
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You're welcome. Happy New Year!