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Start Again

Goals made, and sometimes followed through

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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a great new year 5-7-5 poem. Most people break new year resolutions out of the gate. I don't make them, because if I really want to do something I will.

Great job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    That's how I feel too. I don't make them either. I started a few years ago thinking of a "word or phrase" for the year to help me focus and I didn't do one this year.
    Couple years ago I had "make a difference"
    Thank you for your review and comments.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 05-Jan-2025
    You're welcome. One of the other FS has challenged to people to write everyday. I accepted her challenge and have been writing everyday. I just wish my poems would come easier.
Comment from Janet Foor
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Resolutions that we'll make or break is a great conclusion to your 5/7/5 poem for the contest. We all start with good intentions.
Well done.
Blessings and happy New Year.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
    Thank you for your review and comments. I appreciate it!
    Happy new year.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is true. I've come to see the changes as daily challenges though rather than some magical switch. You use very good imagery and have the correct syllables and new year's sentiment. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much for your review and comments! Happy New Year
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 03-Jan-2025
    You're welcome. Happy New Year!