Year's Rollercoaster
3-7-5 entry5 total reviews
Comment from Patricia Cammish
Neat wording with rhyme within line, not easy in three syllables.
An Interesting take on the ups and downs in a year lived - so an appropriate metaphor and a good accompanying illustration
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Neat wording with rhyme within line, not easy in three syllables.
An Interesting take on the ups and downs in a year lived - so an appropriate metaphor and a good accompanying illustration
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
Comment from Regina Elliott
My very best wishes for the
contest with this exhilarating
short poem, dear poet. Good
start for beginning of 2025.
Have a creative and inspirational weekend. ~
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My very best wishes for the
contest with this exhilarating
short poem, dear poet. Good
start for beginning of 2025.
Have a creative and inspirational weekend. ~
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
Comment from Lana Marie
Well, this can't be any more true than what you chose to write about. I never thought about it in this way until you shared this and I read it. Another new year to live out our roller coaster ride. Great word choices to go along with the photo. Happy New Year!
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Well, this can't be any more true than what you chose to write about. I never thought about it in this way until you shared this and I read it. Another new year to live out our roller coaster ride. Great word choices to go along with the photo. Happy New Year!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem feels like a moment of anticipation. I like the urgency in "climb aboard or you'll miss me." It's short but packed with energy, and I can feel the excitement in the air. Great job capturing that sense of urgency! Keep writing!
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I love how your poem feels like a moment of anticipation. I like the urgency in "climb aboard or you'll miss me." It's short but packed with energy, and I can feel the excitement in the air. Great job capturing that sense of urgency! Keep writing!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
Comment from kahpot
Yes, so very well said and written, a roller-coaster that seems unstoppable at the present time, I think we can only hope, well presented, 3-7-5, happy new year to you, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Yes, so very well said and written, a roller-coaster that seems unstoppable at the present time, I think we can only hope, well presented, 3-7-5, happy new year to you, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
