Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 3-7-5 writing prompt. There is a lot of truth in this poem. Basically, when the day ends, it's in the past and it no longer matters. Each new day is for starting over to make things better. Nicely said.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

thanks for reading and responding

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Simple, to the point, and an excellent use of the proper syllables. There is always something about the hope of a new day that motivates me. As much as possible, we can create good days. Best wishes, Alex

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

thanks for reading and responding

Comment from Trina Layne

Excellent

This is a wonderful little nugget.
A poignant message in your few syllables.
You did well.
Thanks for sharing this.
I wish you success in the competition.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

thanks for reading and responding

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is terrific. The idea of the setting sun erasing mistakes feels so refreshing. I like how you share that each day is a new beginning. It's short but so meaningful. You've created something with so much depth in just a few lines!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025

thanks for reading and responding...appreciate it

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the image
of a setting sun
erasing the day's mistakes
with a fresh start
the next morning
as a rising sun
dawns new ideas. . .

great 375 poem
no spag or typos

only suggestion i can make is maybe add a pic... just a thought ;)

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025

thanks so much for your review and response