Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

I'm thankful that we can go to the Lord for forgiveness! Your poem follows the 3-7-5 prompt to the "t" you were able to say so much in a short amount of words!
Happy New Year!
Blessings!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025

And to you, Lana Marie. Thanks and HNY.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was so emotional. Being on your knees adds weight to the emotions you're sharing . This poem has a quiet strength - very moving! Keep writing with this sincerity it's very touching.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025

Thanks, Michael.