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Mathematician's Paradise

3-7-5 contest entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Lucky that I do not have to take off my shoes to count each line!

Terrific ending to your humorous poem. Good use of the photo to complement your entry.

Best wishes in the voting.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the great review, Mark. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great weekend.

    Ron
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well done and I enjoyed the ambient and you use with it with the person counting the Sobel on his hand. Anytime at night I will be getting an appointment figured out in my head and I find myself canning so on my fingers during the night. Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the great review, Patricia. Yes, I'm sure we all do it. Haha. I really appreciate the stars and stop in. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hi and Happy New Year! This first contest of the year is a good one and you wrote a verse that seems to vent your frustrations at the delays we all have to deal with when we enter these. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the review and stars, Melissa. Yeah, it just bugs me when some folks can't pull off a little 5-7-5 or any short syllable count contest and then we all have to wait two to three days before it goes to booth. I did come off a little strong so I changed it before the deadline. Ranting rarely gets me many votes. Lol. Have yourself a fantastic new year as well, Melissa.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-7-5, Keeping My Fingers Crossed, has the proper formatting and allows that even the newest year will present syllable errors which somehow change the courses of mighty rivers.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
    Lol. Hopefully the rivers will be safe this year. Thank you for the great review and stars, Bill. I appreciate the stop in.