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Sandra's Lover

Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Aliss finds her strength"
A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

We're coming to a day way to go alyssa, kick ass! I always enjoy the way that you write and the quality of your writing. You are articulate and leave nothing to chance. And yet maintain the spirit of secretness, throughout. This is an awesome book, and I think you should consider publishing when you're ready.We can chat if you like. Great work!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Thank you for your review. I am very excited to perhaps publish. I know the book needs a lot of revisions and rewrites but I will work hard to complete a final draft.
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This writing is very well done. Your sin structured your paragraphing and your punctuation all make it to be a very good chapter to listen to. May you have a wonderful new year and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Thank you for your review! Enjoy the next chapter!