2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
An unusual perspective you have alluded to in this poem - nicely done!
Other than your possible intended syllable count, consider: only the blind (person?) feels the wonder.
Best wishes for the New Year.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Gypsy,
An unusual perspective you have alluded to in this poem - nicely done!
Other than your possible intended syllable count, consider: only the blind (person?) feels the wonder.
Best wishes for the New Year.
Mark
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Mark :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa. That is deep and stirring and a supreme reminder of the importance of gratitude and appreciation. Really excellent poem, Gypsy. I apologize for being out of sixes.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Whoa. That is deep and stirring and a supreme reminder of the importance of gratitude and appreciation. Really excellent poem, Gypsy. I apologize for being out of sixes.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i think i'd need my sunglasses in that room lol
cool thought-provoking senryu
an interesting colourful message
smooth flow - no spag or typos
thank you for sharing and happy new year!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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i think i'd need my sunglasses in that room lol
cool thought-provoking senryu
an interesting colourful message
smooth flow - no spag or typos
thank you for sharing and happy new year!
shelley :)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Many times we only miss what we once had and took for granted. Fo those who are able to see, it has become a common sight, but for the one with out vision he uses his other senses to appreciate the wonder. Beautiful and relatable.
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Many times we only miss what we once had and took for granted. Fo those who are able to see, it has become a common sight, but for the one with out vision he uses his other senses to appreciate the wonder. Beautiful and relatable.
RJ
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The blind person is so much more perceptive to the things around them than are the sighted person. We take things for granted. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, presentation, and message.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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The blind person is so much more perceptive to the things around them than are the sighted person. We take things for granted. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, presentation, and message.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Very clever, what a wonderful image your words create, I myself are besides just looking wondering what all the others are doing, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Very clever, what a wonderful image your words create, I myself are besides just looking wondering what all the others are doing, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's so true! We often miss out on the wonder because of taking things for granted! And the blind person can feel the wonder of the sunlight even though he can't see it.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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That's so true! We often miss out on the wonder because of taking things for granted! And the blind person can feel the wonder of the sunlight even though he can't see it.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, Big Sister,
Love,
marival
Comment from Lana Marie
"In a room full of sunshine, only the blind man feels the wonder." This is such a great writing for this small syllable work of Art. I enjoyed what you wrote! I'm so thankful that I am not blind. There's so much beauty to behold in life.
Happy Monday
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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"In a room full of sunshine, only the blind man feels the wonder." This is such a great writing for this small syllable work of Art. I enjoyed what you wrote! I'm so thankful that I am not blind. There's so much beauty to behold in life.
Happy Monday
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
