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Am I Patriotic?

Fighting the fight.

4 total reviews 
Comment from LJbutterfly
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It sounds as though you are an accomplished author who has lived a very active, full and blessed life. You have done a remarkable job of providing the basic high points of your life in such a short space. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
    Thank you, God has been good.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Wonderfully done synopsis that proves you know how to edit with masterful aplomb. Meanwhile, another contestant, age thirty, complained in his Author's Notes that he wished he'd been given more leeway with the word count! Good luck to you in this very challenging contest!! xo

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your kind comments. Some people just need more room ,I suppose.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 31-Dec-2024
    This is true. But what it taught me is that, as we age, we realize what really stands out as "important" and what is more like window dressing. (I pared down my clothes closet today and it's causing me to wax philosophical...)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Great job. I can feel the pride and strength behind your words. It's inspiring to hear about your dedication to family and service. The way you show gratitude each day adds such a beautiful touch. You've built a life full of accomplishments - what an inspiring journey!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
    Sending blessings you way.
Comment from kahpot
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I will say YES, you are patriotic, what a wonderful and exciting life you are living, I bet the children kept you on your toes when they were younger, and you obviously found the right girl to fall in love with, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
    Sending blessings you way.