The Swan Dance
A lesson of love17 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
I went back and realized I had missed this one. Probably the hectic nature of the holidays.
We spent Christmas in a different state and I was quite frazzled.
Fantastic character names and a wonderful adventure, indeed. ( Liked the swan)
D
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I went back and realized I had missed this one. Probably the hectic nature of the holidays.
We spent Christmas in a different state and I was quite frazzled.
Fantastic character names and a wonderful adventure, indeed. ( Liked the swan)
D
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Doug. I head back home on Saturday and yes, writing, reading, and celebrating with the great grand-daughters has been hectic for me as well. I am so far behind that I am going to have to cut and paste except for the ones I received this year. Thank you so much. Happy New Year!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is not only a lovely, magical story of the beauty that is around us and a good lesson that love is at the very centre of life. Beautifully told Carol and I could imagine beautiful artwork around this.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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This is not only a lovely, magical story of the beauty that is around us and a good lesson that love is at the very centre of life. Beautifully told Carol and I could imagine beautiful artwork around this.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thank you for always being there to support and encourage me with my writing. I am thrilled that you enjoy my work.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I'm glad that Timmy gets to share this place with one of his friends. I'm sure they'll take good care of this place and that it'll be something they'll keep just to themselves. If I was them, I wouldn't want to share it with anyone else. Another excellent story, Carol, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I'm glad that Timmy gets to share this place with one of his friends. I'm sure they'll take good care of this place and that it'll be something they'll keep just to themselves. If I was them, I wouldn't want to share it with anyone else. Another excellent story, Carol, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thank you for always being there to support and encourage me with my writing. I am thrilled that you enjoy my work.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
You're right that love - God's love really keeps the world going. I like how you made it a magical story for kids but give us a true spiritual meaning within. Happy New Year!!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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You're right that love - God's love really keeps the world going. I like how you made it a magical story for kids but give us a true spiritual meaning within. Happy New Year!!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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The saying is "Better late than never" and with that in mind I am now trying to thank everyone for all the support and encouragement they gave me during these last weeks as I wrote like a mad woman. I so appreciate every time you went that extra mile for me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
God loves unity, when good things, good people are in agreement with one another, with things that are fluid and flow with one another, like an orchestra who can only sound beautiful when in tune and harmony, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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God loves unity, when good things, good people are in agreement with one another, with things that are fluid and flow with one another, like an orchestra who can only sound beautiful when in tune and harmony, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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The saying is "Better late than never" and with that in mind I am now trying to thank everyone for all the support and encouragement they gave me during these last weeks as I wrote like a mad woman. I so appreciate every time you went that extra mile for me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!! Love is the heart of everything good. We are commanded to love one another. It seems like as humans we often forget that. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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AMEN!! Love is the heart of everything good. We are commanded to love one another. It seems like as humans we often forget that. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sugarray77
So well written, Carol. I could imagine the swans dancing and mesmerizing the children with the visual delight. Your imagination is full of beauty and grace and I thank you for writing this and helping us to enter into the magic with you. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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So well written, Carol. I could imagine the swans dancing and mesmerizing the children with the visual delight. Your imagination is full of beauty and grace and I thank you for writing this and helping us to enter into the magic with you. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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You are always an inspiration with your thoughts, poems and words of encouragement. I can't thank you enough for all your time and reviews. I so appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
Hi there, Carol.
I trust you and your family have had a great Christmas together.
I love these children's storeys. I have this lovely image of you crouched over your keyboard through the day creating your magical tale and then that evening, gathering the great grandchildren to read the latest story of magic and wonder, to an enthralled audience.
Great writing.
Tim x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Hi there, Carol.
I trust you and your family have had a great Christmas together.
I love these children's storeys. I have this lovely image of you crouched over your keyboard through the day creating your magical tale and then that evening, gathering the great grandchildren to read the latest story of magic and wonder, to an enthralled audience.
Great writing.
Tim x
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh my goodness, that was beautiful! You are so good at writing for children as well, this one really brings out the magic that love can give us. It is a good lesson for young children to learn as it will stay with them throughout they lives. I loved the imagery your words gave us, I could see the swans dancing the waltz around the pond. It was truly lovely, my friend. Well done! Love you lots. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Oh my goodness, that was beautiful! You are so good at writing for children as well, this one really brings out the magic that love can give us. It is a good lesson for young children to learn as it will stay with them throughout they lives. I loved the imagery your words gave us, I could see the swans dancing the waltz around the pond. It was truly lovely, my friend. Well done! Love you lots. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Still good. Are you making a children's book now? Your work does not talk down to the children, does not sugar coat the story, or promise glory and fame. It simply states, and good comes from open and true love. Karen
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Still good. Are you making a children's book now? Your work does not talk down to the children, does not sugar coat the story, or promise glory and fame. It simply states, and good comes from open and true love. Karen
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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You are always an inspiration with your thoughts, poems and words of encouragement. I can't thank you enough for all your time and reviews. I so appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
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Thanks for all your thanks :-)
