The Narrow Path
A 369 Poem16 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a lovely prayer poem in 3-6-9 syllables. I like the rhyming final line in each stanza, and also the repetition of walking/taking a step. Blessings. and Happy New Year! Carol
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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This is a lovely prayer poem in 3-6-9 syllables. I like the rhyming final line in each stanza, and also the repetition of walking/taking a step. Blessings. and Happy New Year! Carol
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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With a heart full of gratitude, I wish to thank you for a very nice review
Comment from fm wright
Your choice of using the 3-6-9 format suits this poem well. The message is clear and the words flow excellently together. The image fits your words beautifully.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Your choice of using the 3-6-9 format suits this poem well. The message is clear and the words flow excellently together. The image fits your words beautifully.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for stopping by. Leaving a nice comment and giving me six stars
Comment from Bill Schott
This 369 poem, The Narrow Path, has the proper formatting and finds a prayer to God which asks for vision in one's mission, strength to endure what is needed, and faith in God throughout.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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This 369 poem, The Narrow Path, has the proper formatting and finds a prayer to God which asks for vision in one's mission, strength to endure what is needed, and faith in God throughout.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like that you are humble and loved to share personal prayers. I believe you want all to know God. A simple prayer leads so many to seek His word. God bless!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I like that you are humble and loved to share personal prayers. I believe you want all to know God. A simple prayer leads so many to seek His word. God bless!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review. Yes I do want others to come to know. The Lord is their savior.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Even more than just a lovely poem, this feels like a beautiful prayer. It flows like a song with a natural, enjoyable rhythm. The artwork you chose to join it is equally beautiful. I genuinely enjoyed reading this, Patricia. xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Even more than just a lovely poem, this feels like a beautiful prayer. It flows like a song with a natural, enjoyable rhythm. The artwork you chose to join it is equally beautiful. I genuinely enjoyed reading this, Patricia. xoxo
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good, along with
imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse gives the premise,
and verse two follows that very well.
-A very good closing verse about
having faith in Him.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good, along with
imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse gives the premise,
and verse two follows that very well.
-A very good closing verse about
having faith in Him.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for a lovely review. It's appreciated.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from karenina
As we enter the new year this is a fine time to recommit ourselves to faith. Your 3-6-9 stanzas are simply expressed with the grace of one who loves the Lord!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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As we enter the new year this is a fine time to recommit ourselves to faith. Your 3-6-9 stanzas are simply expressed with the grace of one who loves the Lord!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your faith has never failed you Patricia and it is as strong as ever as you write this endearing and deeply moving poem, much enjoyed, Happy New Year to you, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Your faith has never failed you Patricia and it is as strong as ever as you write this endearing and deeply moving poem, much enjoyed, Happy New Year to you, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your blessed review. I appreciate it very much
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful poem of faith which is needed in order to please God. I like tge way you set it up, its format that fits the theme and purpose very well. Thank you for sharing with me. I pray tgat you have a wonderful evening, and a beautiful night's rest.
RJ
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Beautiful poem of faith which is needed in order to please God. I like tge way you set it up, its format that fits the theme and purpose very well. Thank you for sharing with me. I pray tgat you have a wonderful evening, and a beautiful night's rest.
RJ
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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With gratitude of my heart of wish to thank you for a very nice
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful prayer, Patricia, and one we can pray every day. There is nothing more important. It is a good prayer for the new year as well. Very well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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A beautiful prayer, Patricia, and one we can pray every day. There is nothing more important. It is a good prayer for the new year as well. Very well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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All reviews are important to me and yours is very special. Thank you.
