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Snitch Leads to Getting Hitched

Trouble starts with restaurant snitch.

26 total reviews 
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This part of your story is so intriguing it seems like a fictitious romance story. You were bold and not reluctant to fight for the man you wanted to marry. I can't wait to find out how things turned out.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2025

Comment from estory
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I hear you had to have a pacemaker put in, so first off I want to say you are in my thoughts and prayers as you go through it. My dad had a couple of them put in over the years, so you should be OK. Second, your story illustrates with plenty of personality, the fact that sometimes a little determination goes a long way to overcome cold shoulders. It's easy to just your back and walk away. But the rewards come when you stick with it, break through the ice, and regain the love of your life. estory

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024

Comment from joann r romei
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Wow, things were certainly different back then , lol people date for years and years before popping the question. I enjoyed this chapter and cant wait to hear more.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024

Comment from Jacob1395
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I really enjoyed learning how you came to be with your husband and it made for a really entertaining read. I can imagine how you must've felt that day you described. A well written piece, Beth, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
    Thank you Jacob. Appreciate you reviewing my story and I'm glad you liked it. Beth
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Im glad things worked out with Evan and you got married... it's very romantic. boyfriend

Excellent chapter with good form and composition. Good character and plot development.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -  Atticus

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2024

Comment from jmdg1954
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I do enjoy a story with a happy ending! I guess Rhomas was looking out for his brother but could've maybe been more understanding... we'll never know. And now, so what! You've been married how many years???

I just read a post from Helen and her notes indicated you were hospitalized and had a pacemaker "installed"..

Wishing you the best and back on your feet in no time!

Cheers,
John

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
    Thank you John I appreciate you reading that post and reviewing it. Thanks for the good wishes concerning my recovery Beth
Comment from GWHARGIS
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That is the worst when someone talks to your love and sets the stage for complications. Who do they trust. I'm guessing you set him straight but the uncomfortable dates must have been torture. Great installment. Gretchen

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024

Comment from royowen
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That's nice thst you knew whom you wanted to marry, some girls aren't quite sure, but you are "sticker", one who is sure of what she wants and doesn't want, I had a girlfriend who I was sure I was going to marry as a teen, but she wasn't, and them there was Elaine, God's choice, and I'm glad of that, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Oh my word! That could easily have gone the other way. But once you had told him you loved him and want to marry him NOW, things immediately changed for the better. His brother was a real stirrer, you had explained to him and he still wanted to cause trouble. This was a really good chapter in your life, and Evan won a very loving, very strong, determined wife! Wonderful place to stop, my friend. Well done!! Sandra xx

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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I remember how your future brother-in-law snitched on you about being with all those guys in the restaurant. I guess Evan was sure you were going to break up with him and you surprised him with the marriage proposal which changed the world for him! I was chuckling all through your retelling.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
    Thank you Helen for the review. I started passing out Friday and had to go to the emergency room and have a pacemaker put in I just got it this morning so I'll probably be off fans for a while. Beth
reply by lyenochka on 30-Dec-2024
    Oh, I'm shocked to hear this. You'll be in my prayers, Beth. But I'll also be off Fanstory for about three weeks or so. Hugs and prayers!