the ants
Dodoitsu poem33 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
What an interesting subject matter! 'the ant' they are a complete nuisance but they are amazing little insects all that work they do!!
Interesting image is that a microscopic view?
Good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
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What an interesting subject matter! 'the ant' they are a complete nuisance but they are amazing little insects all that work they do!!
Interesting image is that a microscopic view?
Good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
Comment from jmdg1954
"in frustration huge humans
curse and stomp their feet"
A natural reaction I suppose.
I have no idea of the style of poem so my assumption is that your poem meets the criteria.
A comical theme in my mind. Thank you for sharing,
John
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"in frustration huge humans
curse and stomp their feet"
A natural reaction I suppose.
I have no idea of the style of poem so my assumption is that your poem meets the criteria.
A comical theme in my mind. Thank you for sharing,
John
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sanku, for as small as they are...they can lift
things that weigh so much more than they do...
and yes those big huge humans have no use for them...
I'm sure God put them here for a reason...but they can
be pesty little critters...
love you poem you...and love your picture...
very well written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
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Hi Sanku, for as small as they are...they can lift
things that weigh so much more than they do...
and yes those big huge humans have no use for them...
I'm sure God put them here for a reason...but they can
be pesty little critters...
love you poem you...and love your picture...
very well written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
In your short poem, you have done an admirable job describing the relationship between large men and tiny ants. The poem makes sense as it is written from the perspective of the ants, which is interesting.
Robert
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In your short poem, you have done an admirable job describing the relationship between large men and tiny ants. The poem makes sense as it is written from the perspective of the ants, which is interesting.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Kayte Ray
This one made me chuckle..
I don't know of anyone who can't relate to this.
Its a solid picture that any reader can relate to,
Your image is also a great choice here. I really like this poem thanks for sharing.
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This one made me chuckle..
I don't know of anyone who can't relate to this.
Its a solid picture that any reader can relate to,
Your image is also a great choice here. I really like this poem thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from jaded831
Your poem captures the frustration one feels over ants invading human territory. It is simple yet beautiful. It presents the ants as an unstoppable army that keeps coming. You leave the imagination wondering who will be the victor.
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Your poem captures the frustration one feels over ants invading human territory. It is simple yet beautiful. It presents the ants as an unstoppable army that keeps coming. You leave the imagination wondering who will be the victor.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
A poem that I can certainly relate to, we are infested with ants in the summer. If you leave so much as a crumb on the counter, the ants will swarm. Very well composed.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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A poem that I can certainly relate to, we are infested with ants in the summer. If you leave so much as a crumb on the counter, the ants will swarm. Very well composed.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by .They are amazing creatures .How they get the scent of one grain of sugar is beyond me .You see them marching ..
Comment from Rachelle Allen
They are a remarkable group, aren't they? And how flagrantly they prove that it doesn't matter how tiny you are; there us strength in numbers. Very well done dodoitsu! Great artwork, too! Xo
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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They are a remarkable group, aren't they? And how flagrantly they prove that it doesn't matter how tiny you are; there us strength in numbers. Very well done dodoitsu! Great artwork, too! Xo
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I know .so tiny yet we are helpless .They wil find where we keep our sweets or cakes!
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For that reason, I'm pretty sure I was an ant in a former life...
Comment from Douglas Goff
Dang those angry stomping humans. Always smashing and bashing!
And the magnifying glasses. Do not even get me started!
Ant life. Am I right or am I right!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Dang those angry stomping humans. Always smashing and bashing!
And the magnifying glasses. Do not even get me started!
Ant life. Am I right or am I right!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you.you are right LoL
Comment from Charles D Ezell
These little guys are interesting except for the nuisance they cause while trying to survive. Fire Ants are a pain to our yards. We burn one hill out another appears. Good post.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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These little guys are interesting except for the nuisance they cause while trying to survive. Fire Ants are a pain to our yards. We burn one hill out another appears. Good post.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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It is a wonder how the smell out where we keep our stuff.
