Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely poem and so well illustrated! I especially liked the "lilac mellow waves" and the "veil of stardust." And I love that the trees are "clothed" with the nightingale songs!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 big sister.

Love,

Marival

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

rises triumphantely" (triumphantly) what a beautiful description of the transition between night and day, and once again, beautifully written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Your presentation and poem are both wonderful. I liked the idea of:

"ancient trees

clothe themselves

with nightingale songs"

That's a beautiful thought.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, 😊

Gypsy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Most people I know prefer sunrise to sunset, I have always favored the evening. It has held magical times for me, and I am told I am an evening child. Beautiful presentation as the evening beacons the shireline with cool embrace. Thanks fir sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, 😊

Gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 26-Dec-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool blue seashells
triunfante <-- is this triumphant in spanish? (i failed spanish class in high school lol!

great imagery flowing smoothly through the lilac waves of sunset
didn't notice any spag or typos
love the colours!!!

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024

I have triumphantly. I double check the dictionary.

Thank you very much,

Gypsy