Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

After reading your poem, my question was do swans mate for life. Of course, me being me, I had to immediately research it. Yes, they do, then I came back and read your author's notes before writing the review. I didn't need to do any research. All I needed to do was read further. Thank you for doing another wonderful job sharing your talent with us.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, 😊

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's true. When lifelong partners have learned to accommodate each other's habits and idiosyncratic ways, they don't need words. They just understand each other!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, big sister ❤️ happy Christmas day

Love

Marival ❤️

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

They're so beautiful and, as you say, they pair for life which makes them all the more special to us. Your visuals with their reflections excellently complement your fine verse which culminates so aptly and profoundly with your final line. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy Yule and Christmas

Gypsy hugs 😊

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i love how swans' necks and heads make hearts... so cool!

soundless. . . swans sail off in love--
two minds in one heart. . . always.

cool renga with romantic imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy Yule and Christmas

Gypsy hugs 😊