Why on Christmas Eve?
Things aren't always happy and bright.11 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is another great story to do a segue back into the next book. You are keeping our memories fresh with these short stories. They are moving right along.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is another great story to do a segue back into the next book. You are keeping our memories fresh with these short stories. They are moving right along.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
You scared me silly with the noises on the porch and the rattling of the doorknob. It's good that Eleanor is there with Jenna, protecting her and the baby. With Doyle and Rossi having escaped, nobody is safe from their evil doings. Great chapter. Blessings. Carol
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You scared me silly with the noises on the porch and the rattling of the doorknob. It's good that Eleanor is there with Jenna, protecting her and the baby. With Doyle and Rossi having escaped, nobody is safe from their evil doings. Great chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I might have read these chapters in the wrong order but it doesn't matter because I've now got a very strong sense of the danger posed by these two offenders, Ross and Doyle. And, in particular, the danger posed to Eleanor's daughter, Jenna and her baby, Maggie. You skilfully built this scene up, Carol, with excellent tension and anticipation and I even found myself holding my breath. Thank you so much for sharing this intriguing story with Eleanor, already, very much coming into her own. Warm wishes Debbie
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I think I might have read these chapters in the wrong order but it doesn't matter because I've now got a very strong sense of the danger posed by these two offenders, Ross and Doyle. And, in particular, the danger posed to Eleanor's daughter, Jenna and her baby, Maggie. You skilfully built this scene up, Carol, with excellent tension and anticipation and I even found myself holding my breath. Thank you so much for sharing this intriguing story with Eleanor, already, very much coming into her own. Warm wishes Debbie
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from karenina
Oh...darn. I'm sad that orphans have been killed in what looks like an arranged crash to free the "bad guys" -- Can you bring them back as happy spirits? (Okay, so I am wishing a little too hard I guess)
This is full of action and mystery, and as addictive as all of your other "Eleanor" chapters.
I can't get enough of her!
Are you down south yet?
I hope you're warmer than I am!
Karenina
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Oh...darn. I'm sad that orphans have been killed in what looks like an arranged crash to free the "bad guys" -- Can you bring them back as happy spirits? (Okay, so I am wishing a little too hard I guess)
This is full of action and mystery, and as addictive as all of your other "Eleanor" chapters.
I can't get enough of her!
Are you down south yet?
I hope you're warmer than I am!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is another great chapter full of excitement! I can't wait for the next chapter now. I hope they catch those evil ones for good. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
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Carol, This is another great chapter full of excitement! I can't wait for the next chapter now. I hope they catch those evil ones for good. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
Well those masters of deception and with violent tendencies and predispositions are on the loose, and knowing John Doyle's propensity for revenge and mayhem, Jenna, Matthew and Margaret aren't safe, but mind you they've got one or two ghosts to help, well done, Carol, blessings Roy
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Well those masters of deception and with violent tendencies and predispositions are on the loose, and knowing John Doyle's propensity for revenge and mayhem, Jenna, Matthew and Margaret aren't safe, but mind you they've got one or two ghosts to help, well done, Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sorry I read these two out of order. I still understood what's going on. I can't wait to read more.
Jenna swallowed hard, her voice barely above a whisper. "What if they come back?" (whisper,)
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Sorry I read these two out of order. I still understood what's going on. I can't wait to read more.
Jenna swallowed hard, her voice barely above a whisper. "What if they come back?" (whisper,)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
Thank you once again for a very delightful story to listen to on this day before Christmas. Throughout the year, I have had the pleasure of reading many of your works and it has always been a delight. I wish you the very best with your writing this next year and may you find ya Has his hand on your life. Patricia.
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Thank you once again for a very delightful story to listen to on this day before Christmas. Throughout the year, I have had the pleasure of reading many of your works and it has always been a delight. I wish you the very best with your writing this next year and may you find ya Has his hand on your life. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't do cigars anymore; although, I still love the smell of a good one, or blended pipe tobacco bubbling in a bowl. Thanks for sharing chapter three in another of your enjoyable Christmas stories. I'm guessing you're on your way to the Tar Heel state. Have a wonderful Christmas!
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I don't do cigars anymore; although, I still love the smell of a good one, or blended pipe tobacco bubbling in a bowl. Thanks for sharing chapter three in another of your enjoyable Christmas stories. I'm guessing you're on your way to the Tar Heel state. Have a wonderful Christmas!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
And so begins the new book, the judge is free and after all those who 'betrayed' him, and he doesn't care who gets hurt as he goes along with his vengeance. I can't wait to get stuck in with this new one. Welcome back to all the gang!! Happy Christmas, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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And so begins the new book, the judge is free and after all those who 'betrayed' him, and he doesn't care who gets hurt as he goes along with his vengeance. I can't wait to get stuck in with this new one. Welcome back to all the gang!! Happy Christmas, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2024