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Blessing in Disguise

150 word flash fiction for the contest

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Comment from lyenochka
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Oh the irony! Yes, there are lots of folklore about Pele in Hawaii. I remember my classmates saying that picking this flower from that location would bring a curse from Pele. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

Comment from Sugarray77
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Hey June.... good morning and this little story is so interesting, especially after you read the notes. Great job on the construction of this short flash. I know it will do well!

Melissa

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

Comment from royowen
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An interesting story, what did happen sounds like a bit of a curse on one, but perhaps warning not to take anymore lava, well done June, an excellent post my friend, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024