Invitation For Christmas Eve
A short story about an invitation for Christmas Eve.6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm very pleased it all turned out ok for Amber because you certainly managed to set a very spooky and off-putting atmosphere on her journey to her destination. A lovely contrast then between the warmth and hospitality of the inside and the chill and foreboding outside. Well done, Brenda, and thank you for an intriguing and enjoyable read. Warm wishes for the holidays, Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024
I'm very pleased it all turned out ok for Amber because you certainly managed to set a very spooky and off-putting atmosphere on her journey to her destination. A lovely contrast then between the warmth and hospitality of the inside and the chill and foreboding outside. Well done, Brenda, and thank you for an intriguing and enjoyable read. Warm wishes for the holidays, Debbie
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Debbie thank you for your wonderful review. Happy holidays to you and your family, Brenda
Comment from RJ Heritage
Nicely written story with intriguing storyline, that is both believable and interesting. Thank you fir sharing, and have a great Christmas, and a Happy New Year.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
Nicely written story with intriguing storyline, that is both believable and interesting. Thank you fir sharing, and have a great Christmas, and a Happy New Year.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the great review. Have a Merry Christmas!
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful Christmas story, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I admire Amber for taking and having the courage to get her self up to the cabin so that she could have Christmas with her friends. I also want to wish you a very merry Christmas and may you find that your Christmas is the best you've ever had. PatriciaK
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
This is a wonderful Christmas story, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I admire Amber for taking and having the courage to get her self up to the cabin so that she could have Christmas with her friends. I also want to wish you a very merry Christmas and may you find that your Christmas is the best you've ever had. PatriciaK
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you, the same to you. Thank you for tge great review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Brenda,
This is a great story. The mystery around the whole thing is great. You can feel the suspense as she walks through the wood. I'm glad it was her friends when they opened the door. It could have been a serial killer. She was a brave soul to go to the unknown.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
Brenda,
This is a great story. The mystery around the whole thing is great. You can feel the suspense as she walks through the wood. I'm glad it was her friends when they opened the door. It could have been a serial killer. She was a brave soul to go to the unknown.
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Cecilia for this great review. Have a Merry Christmas!
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You're welcome. I will try to have a good Christmas
Comment from royowen
Sometimes it seems to me that some of the best Christmasses are positively accidental, and it seems that Amber almost May not have made it, and she had a ball with her friends, beautifully written Breda, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
Sometimes it seems to me that some of the best Christmasses are positively accidental, and it seems that Amber almost May not have made it, and she had a ball with her friends, beautifully written Breda, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you for this very nice review. Roy, I hope you and your family have a Merry Christmas. Your friend, Brenda
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Merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year Brenda, Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I was fearful as I read your story that some tragedy would befall this woman after she accepted this unusual invitation and I am so glad this story had a happy ending Brenda, have a Merry Christmas, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
I was fearful as I read your story that some tragedy would befall this woman after she accepted this unusual invitation and I am so glad this story had a happy ending Brenda, have a Merry Christmas, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Hi Dolly, thank you for the very nice review. I hope you have a Merry Christmas
Love, Brenda