BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Mating Moves"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
7 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What an idyllic setting your words paint here, and the connection with the 7-7 you provided, fat frogs as to suggest they have secured their fill, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024
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What an idyllic setting your words paint here, and the connection with the 7-7 you provided, fat frogs as to suggest they have secured their fill, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy Yule and Christmas
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine write, Gypsy......and I find mating rituals nature's way of saying, "look at my package, baby, get it while it's hot, or I'm arrested
. Guess I better put some pants on!"
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Another fine write, Gypsy......and I find mating rituals nature's way of saying, "look at my package, baby, get it while it's hot, or I'm arrested
. Guess I better put some pants on!"
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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LoL 😆
Thank you very much 😊
Have a wonderful Christmas eve and day! 🎄 🎅 🤶 🌲
Gypsy
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Thank you, Gypsy, and wishing you the same
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do believe that crane probably has some moves using the moon for a spotlight. I can't believe any different. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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I do believe that crane probably has some moves using the moon for a spotlight. I can't believe any different. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Have a wonderful Christmas eve and day! 🎄 🎅 🤶 🌲
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love image of the moon as a spotlight
and a crane using it while preparing for mating--
nice mating/wading near rhyme, too...
cool alliteration with moves and moon
smooth flow throughout
and no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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love image of the moon as a spotlight
and a crane using it while preparing for mating--
nice mating/wading near rhyme, too...
cool alliteration with moves and moon
smooth flow throughout
and no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for the definitions of cranes and herons. To me they look very similar but now that you mention it, they behave differently! I like the spotlight that the crane is enjoying to get the mate's attention!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the definitions of cranes and herons. To me they look very similar but now that you mention it, they behave differently! I like the spotlight that the crane is enjoying to get the mate's attention!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I have a hard time telling them apart.
I hope you had a good weekend. Mine went by too fast. This coming week is going to be short.
Love
Marival ❤️
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I know! Christmas week is always too fast!! 💖🎄🎵
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My whole family, in my house are sick. 😔 I'm okay so I have to take care of them.
Gypsy
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Oh no!! Please take good care of yourself. Do you have enough vitamin C and supplements? So many people here are getting some virus that affects their lungs. Will be praying for quick healing for your family and protection for you! 💖💞🙏
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Thank you, big sister. I used to take vitamin C but I stopped. I will start again but we have a stomach flue. We all got it now. Atticus got it at school.
❤️ Marival
Comment from zanya
The crane here in this poem almost comes alive through the power of the effective use of language, as it 'performs its mating moves,'and in such a delightful setting.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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The crane here in this poem almost comes alive through the power of the effective use of language, as it 'performs its mating moves,'and in such a delightful setting.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely follow-on Renga poem that highlights the pond, this time with a heron taking the starring role. Beautifully presented. Well done, Gypsy. Warm wishes Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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A lovely follow-on Renga poem that highlights the pond, this time with a heron taking the starring role. Beautifully presented. Well done, Gypsy. Warm wishes Debbie
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy