BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Birds and Fat Frogs"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing about daytime fireflies. And then there are nocturnal birds like the nightingales which serenade at night. I'm wondering how the frogs got fat. Hopefully not on the fireflies. Lol.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing about daytime fireflies. And then there are nocturnal birds like the nightingales which serenade at night. I'm wondering how the frogs got fat. Hopefully not on the fireflies. Lol.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Haha.... I lived by a lake for three years, there were huge frogs... disgusting 🫣
Thank you very much, big sister 😊
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I was just thinking about the fat frogs. I don't think a skinny frog would be healthy. I think frogs are supposed to be fat. Now I'm wondering if it's okay for grandma's to be fat. LOL Sorry, I ADD kicked in. This is a cute poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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I was just thinking about the fat frogs. I don't think a skinny frog would be healthy. I think frogs are supposed to be fat. Now I'm wondering if it's okay for grandma's to be fat. LOL Sorry, I ADD kicked in. This is a cute poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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It's okay to be fat. In our society fat has a bad reputation but I know fat people who are in great shape. Of course that's not the same as the over 500 pds ... that's very unhealthy. The morbidly obese.
Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
wait... what birds? and don't fireflies come out after dark?
cute little amphibians, though... as long as they don't jump on me that is LOL
great imagery in these two little lines
a lot shown in so few words
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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wait... what birds? and don't fireflies come out after dark?
cute little amphibians, though... as long as they don't jump on me that is LOL
great imagery in these two little lines
a lot shown in so few words
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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There are "daytime fireflies". They are less popular than the night ones.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
And more alliteration, this time with your fat frogs and fireflies! I'm not sure if the frogs would provide a very good accompaniment to the birdsong in the serenade:)) But I enjoyed the read which follows on beautifully from the last Renga poem. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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And more alliteration, this time with your fat frogs and fireflies! I'm not sure if the frogs would provide a very good accompaniment to the birdsong in the serenade:)) But I enjoyed the read which follows on beautifully from the last Renga poem. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and it's presented very beautifully. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I also enjoyed your presentation because of its beauty. May you have a lovely evening and may you have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This is very nicely written and it's presented very beautifully. I enjoyed very much listening to it and I also enjoyed your presentation because of its beauty. May you have a lovely evening and may you have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy