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Let's go to Kylie's Birthday

(Davisr) Rhonda's little Angel

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Comment from NanaGaye
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What a little sweetie Kylie is and what a charming poem your wrote about her. I wish I could give her a hug and teach her some dance steps and of course you as well Happy Happy Christmas

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

Comment from Teri7
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This is a very sweet and precious Happy Birthday poem for little Kylie. What an adorable little girl she is. Kylie, I hope you have so much fun on your birthday! Thanks for sharing, Debi. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

Comment from Mintybee
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This is a very sweet poem. It captures the child's excitement and the adults' joy very well. It was clearly a lovely birthday for everyone. I like how you included a wide range of activities because that's how kids are, jumping from one special thing to another. I'm glad you included all of it.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

Comment from Jacob1395
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I hope she has a great birthday, she certainly sounds like a very special child as well who has a lot of love to give. Another excellent birthday poem, Debi. I hope you have a great Christmas.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024

Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your poem "Let's go to Kylie's Birthday" is an endearing and delightful celebration of a young child's birthday. The playful and loving tone throughout the poem captures the essence of childhood joy and family warmth. Each stanza paints a vivid picture of Kylie's special day, making it easy for readers to feel like they are part of the festivities.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Peter, I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful and kind review and comments for Kylie's birthday poem. Her grandma, Rhonda, who writes with us of course will appreciate it so much too. Also, thanks for the six stars for it. Merry Christmas to you and yours, my dear friend. Love, Debi
reply by Peter Jarvis on 24-Dec-2024
    Hi Debi
    You are most welcome..
    Bless you
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Kylie sounds like a good talker for a four-year-old. She certainly has a lot of animals to introduce you to. She told her wish when she blew out her candles, so there won't be any pink Texas snow.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Hi Carol, yes, Kylie is a great talker, but at four I think most are.
    I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful and kind review and comments for Kylie's birthday poem. Rhonda of course will appreciate it so much too. Merry Christmas to you and yours, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from T B Botts
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Here's wishing a happy (belated) fourth birthday to Kylie. I hope she grows up to be as happy as happy and delightful as an adult as she appears to be now. It's obvious that she is loved greatly. Enjoy your time with your grandparents sweetie.
Thanks for sharing this Debi.
Blessings,
Tom

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Hi Tom, I hope you are right about how happy she is when she grows up.
    I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful and kind review and comments for Kylie's birthday poem. Rhonda of course will appreciate it so much too. Merry Christmas to you and yours, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from ESOSTINE
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A lovely birthday tribute to an amazing young girl, Kylie. I am sure she will be very happy to read this poem penned in kindness and admiration. Good work here as always, dear Debi. Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Esostine, I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful and kind review and comments for Kylie's birthday poem. Rhonda of course will appreciate it so much too. Merry Christmas to you and yours, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Oh, Kylie what a sweetheart of a little girl, here's wishing Wishing you the Happiest of Birthdays! There is nothing in the world that fills our hearts with joy more than children. Then, they grow up, and we wish we could give them back. Just joking. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    I know what you meant, Ric, and I feel the same way. I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful and kind review and comments for Kylie's birthday poem. Rhonda of course will appreciate it so much too. Merry Christmas to you and yours, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
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What hard hearted ogre does not like a sweet little child's birthday celebration? Best keep that ogre away from me, because I will beat and mistreat him for free. Birthday and holiday celebrations are the things that nurture a child's growing years, replacing laughter for the disappointing tears and fears. We must never allow anyone to deny them.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Hey Nomi, I feel the same way about those who could hurt a child. As a molestation survivor it makes my blood boil to think about it.

    I can't thank you enough for such a wonderful and kind review and comments for Kylie's birthday poem. Rhonda of course will appreciate it so much too. Merry Christmas to you and yours, my dear BBBB. Love, Debi