Barefoot In The Rain
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Barefoot in The Rain Chap 6"An unexpected accident brings unexpected thoughts
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Comment from karenina
Good gravy Marie! Kendra has only seen James a few times! Rachel needs to back off a little...
Why is it men can date four women at once and it's fine, but heaven forbid a single woman have an interest in two of whom she's in any way committed to and the push is on!
Grrrr.
Have fun, Kendra! Do what your heart says and quiet the naysayers!
(Phew! I had to get that off my chest!)
Hmm.
I wonder how you'll be wrapping this up!
Karenina
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Good gravy Marie! Kendra has only seen James a few times! Rachel needs to back off a little...
Why is it men can date four women at once and it's fine, but heaven forbid a single woman have an interest in two of whom she's in any way committed to and the push is on!
Grrrr.
Have fun, Kendra! Do what your heart says and quiet the naysayers!
(Phew! I had to get that off my chest!)
Hmm.
I wonder how you'll be wrapping this up!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Kendra really is between a rock and a hard place. She seems to like James, but she isn't dreaming about a future with him. She has been obsessed with Ethan, but can she really fit into his world? Vanessa has proved to her that she might have a hard time fitting into the world of the rich and bitchy.
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Kendra really is between a rock and a hard place. She seems to like James, but she isn't dreaming about a future with him. She has been obsessed with Ethan, but can she really fit into his world? Vanessa has proved to her that she might have a hard time fitting into the world of the rich and bitchy.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Wendy G
She's very confused, and understandably so. She needs to see more of Ethan to find out if the spark is the precursor to friendship and love, but with Vanessa hovering, and not holding back, that's hard to do. James deserves her love - he is a good and fine man, but love can't be forced.
Well written chapter, maintaining the interest.
Wendy
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She's very confused, and understandably so. She needs to see more of Ethan to find out if the spark is the precursor to friendship and love, but with Vanessa hovering, and not holding back, that's hard to do. James deserves her love - he is a good and fine man, but love can't be forced.
Well written chapter, maintaining the interest.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
I must without a plot, either ambiguous in nature, or walking a thin line, and I'm not sure about the implications of either, and plot is a lead balloon, and you seem to have mastered the art of the romantic, but life can be like that, I can remember dead end crushes I had. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I must without a plot, either ambiguous in nature, or walking a thin line, and I'm not sure about the implications of either, and plot is a lead balloon, and you seem to have mastered the art of the romantic, but life can be like that, I can remember dead end crushes I had. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a great chapter. I had a feeling especially when he showed up on the patios. It's sad for Kendra that Ethan doesn't remember that he met her Kendra on the train. Now what is she going to be up too.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is a great chapter. I had a feeling especially when he showed up on the patios. It's sad for Kendra that Ethan doesn't remember that he met her Kendra on the train. Now what is she going to be up too.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's Friday, or is it, and I seldom to almost never have any stars left past Monday or so. But these last two chapters certainly deserved all the star that can be given. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter!
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It's Friday, or is it, and I seldom to almost never have any stars left past Monday or so. But these last two chapters certainly deserved all the star that can be given. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good chapter! Rachel has good advice, but she's a bit pushy. Perhaps it's what Kendra needs, however. The warning about a safety plan probably means you're going to throw in a super-duper twist. LOL! Hugs! Carol
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Good chapter! Rachel has good advice, but she's a bit pushy. Perhaps it's what Kendra needs, however. The warning about a safety plan probably means you're going to throw in a super-duper twist. LOL! Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm afraid that Kendra might get hurt. I'm worried this story may not have a happy ending. I can see it going both ways. I want Ethan to remember that moment on the train between them.
Kendra nodded, her voice quiet. "I'll be careful. I promise." (quiet,)
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I'm afraid that Kendra might get hurt. I'm worried this story may not have a happy ending. I can see it going both ways. I want Ethan to remember that moment on the train between them.
Kendra nodded, her voice quiet. "I'll be careful. I promise." (quiet,)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can understand Kendria, if she doesn't sort this out, and just carries on with James, she will always wonder, and that is no good for a relationship. James might be the one, but until she finds out if her dream was all fantasy, or if Ethan truly is her soul mate she will always be stuck at that train station. I can't wait to see how this ends. Well done again, my amazing friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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I can understand Kendria, if she doesn't sort this out, and just carries on with James, she will always wonder, and that is no good for a relationship. James might be the one, but until she finds out if her dream was all fantasy, or if Ethan truly is her soul mate she will always be stuck at that train station. I can't wait to see how this ends. Well done again, my amazing friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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We shall soon know what happens, I think.... But I'm not positive myself just yet. Thanks for the review and hope you are having a wonderful day. Time for me to brave the cold... and turn into Frosty the Snowman myself. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
Ok so I was wrong, no pew pew, just a bit of phew phew.
The story is coming along well, Carol.
And, despite it being a romance (Which I don't do) is keeping me entertained and engaged
Tim x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Ok so I was wrong, no pew pew, just a bit of phew phew.
The story is coming along well, Carol.
And, despite it being a romance (Which I don't do) is keeping me entertained and engaged
Tim x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Lucky for you....and me... it's almost over. Got to wrap it up before I fly off on my Christmas sleigh. LOL Thanks for putting up with me and reading this short.
Smiles, Carol