Humitree
A poem of creation, my word is create27 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Brilliant story/poem. The illustration compliments the story/poem. This is not beyond belief because man is always experimenting. I thought your poem was clever in building the future of man. Fiction, I hope.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Brilliant story/poem. The illustration compliments the story/poem. This is not beyond belief because man is always experimenting. I thought your poem was clever in building the future of man. Fiction, I hope.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Wow, you have just honored me with this fabulous 6I thank you so much. I feel grateful to receive it.Truly happy you enjoy these! I shall carry on writing about these people and see where it goes. Thank you again for stopping in and reading, offering this awesome rating for which I am privileged to receive. Thank you very much.Have an awesome night!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a fabulous poem, and the idea is amazing! I read your other reviews and agree that it would make a fabulous novel. I doubt anyone else has thought of this as a story. But I can visualise it. You must try it, or I might pinch your idea!!! LOL. I'm off to read your other two now. Excellent, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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That was a fabulous poem, and the idea is amazing! I read your other reviews and agree that it would make a fabulous novel. I doubt anyone else has thought of this as a story. But I can visualise it. You must try it, or I might pinch your idea!!! LOL. I'm off to read your other two now. Excellent, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Sandra, thank you, james.You honor me with your attention, truly, you do. Again I am pleased that you like them! Thank you for reading and rating and writing. I very much appreciate it so much. Really?Thank you again! I hope you have the best holiday ever. I need to move here. It's awesome for you and your family!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, you come up with some wild words! The last few I had to reread it to get the meaning of where you were coming from as far as a manitree developing into girlitree and mate. This is a wonderful concept and worth developing into a novel or a short story. Even as poetry, it shines bright as the living light of the sun.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Wow, you come up with some wild words! The last few I had to reread it to get the meaning of where you were coming from as far as a manitree developing into girlitree and mate. This is a wonderful concept and worth developing into a novel or a short story. Even as poetry, it shines bright as the living light of the sun.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Yes, yes, I think you're right. I'm going to try and see what happens, and I will have you to thank for that! I appreciate all your kind words. And the great reviews you have been giving, and I believe the reader is most important in this operation. And that is you, your perspective, and the perspective of other readers is important, and it should be taken to note. Thank you again Jesse happy new year!
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I hope other readers will spur you to write a book about this creative concept for a new species of humintrees.
Jesse
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A couple people have mentioned it. Yes you were the 1st.
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I believe the concept would be exciting for plenty of readers to read in a published novel. Please, consider the idea.
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Thank you! I will!
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I'm glad. Spread your creativity throughout the world of novels.
People will be eating it up.
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Thank you for the awesome encouragement!
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You're welcome, Lea.
Have a great day,
Jesse
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U2!
Comment from royowen
Occasionally I might open up these verbs etc and I love playing with these action words and write them into a very active poem, descriptively chewing the cud as it were, beautifully written Lea, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Occasionally I might open up these verbs etc and I love playing with these action words and write them into a very active poem, descriptively chewing the cud as it were, beautifully written Lea, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Thank you again.You're a fully smokes, batman! It seems there a bit of a hit.These mutant people let us carry on with them for a while and see what happens. Thank you so very much. I'm so happy to receive your review. Once again, a great writing, and again your time which is valuable. Hohoho!
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Well done
Comment from nomi338
This awesome entry illustrates the creativity possible to one who possesses the necessary skills. One question, how long did it take you to come up with the rhyming words? I tried to see if I could duplicate your great submission. I gave up after a few unproductive tries.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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This awesome entry illustrates the creativity possible to one who possesses the necessary skills. One question, how long did it take you to come up with the rhyming words? I tried to see if I could duplicate your great submission. I gave up after a few unproductive tries.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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How to use Google or thesaurus? And I'll pick words that rhyme and and if I don't understand the word, I'll see allah read up its meaning and if it fits, I'll use it. I'll say things to Google like rhymes. With tradition, and then it'll come up with all the words that rhyme with that, at least on the back end. It just seemed the way to go is just sort of fell into my head. I'm so happy you like this. Truly. I'm so happy to see your review too. I thank you also for your time. Especially christmas day.Your rating and your comments all great, thank you so much.And I hope that your new year is amazing too!
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Gotcha! Thanks for the info.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lea
This is an interesting idea. Though it is an extension of Tolkien's Ents.
Great artwork that shows what they would look like. I like the mono-rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Hi Lea
This is an interesting idea. Though it is an extension of Tolkien's Ents.
Great artwork that shows what they would look like. I like the mono-rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Joan, thank you so much! I appreciate this, especially during the holiday when everyone's so busy. That you took the time to read.Great and write.Thank you again! I truly hope your holiday was great. Mm, that new year's will be even greater.I thank you again and I hope your night is great too!
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You are most kindly welcome, Lea. Same to you.
Joan
Comment from Lana Marie
Oh that studly looking couple how they have a look of power to regenerate! I enjoyed all the rhymes that you used to generate your rhyming poem! This is great!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Oh that studly looking couple how they have a look of power to regenerate! I enjoyed all the rhymes that you used to generate your rhyming poem! This is great!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Lana, thank you so much. I appreciate your review and I appreciate you. Taking the time to read to write and to rate, especially during the holiday! I'm super glad you liked them, and please. That you do, and I hope that you're holiday was great, and that new year's will be even greater.Thank you again!
Comment from kahpot
"Manitree, Girlitree fate
radiate"
i really like this line, yes, we should celebrate and be very happy that we have the opportunity to be here, as before, you certainly have wonderful imagination and creativity, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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"Manitree, Girlitree fate
radiate"
i really like this line, yes, we should celebrate and be very happy that we have the opportunity to be here, as before, you certainly have wonderful imagination and creativity, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Thank you. I'm so pleased you like them. And that you have supported me along the way. I am very much appreciated.And I do notice not something I shall easily forget. Your comments are always uplifting, kind and insightful. I'm happy to receive that to, especially during the holiday, when everyone's so busy. Your time 2 is valuable, that's awesome. Thank you so much.Have a great night!
Comment from Begin Again
I'm not a poet, nor am I a sci-fi fan, but what I am - is a writer who likes to dig deep into the mind and find something different and filled with creativity. You've done that ten-fold with this series of poems. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I'm not a poet, nor am I a sci-fi fan, but what I am - is a writer who likes to dig deep into the mind and find something different and filled with creativity. You've done that ten-fold with this series of poems. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you, carol, that's really great of you to say that I appreciate it very much! I shall continue with this species of tree and human. Let's see where it leads continue, making pictures and put it out there and your comments encourage me.Thank you very much! I hope that you're ready for your holiday and that it's wonderful for you and yours!
Comment from Tim Margetts
I really am enjoying this series, Lea.
This poem is excellent in the way it plays with a single rhyme throughout.
Though you did forget the Dr's rhyme... exterminate
Tim x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I really am enjoying this series, Lea.
This poem is excellent in the way it plays with a single rhyme throughout.
Though you did forget the Dr's rhyme... exterminate
Tim x
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Lol.... Thank you, Tim. ISO appreciate you and your review truely. I'm very happy to receive them! I always like your comments. They're very insightful, because you see exactly what i'm writing about, no question. A mark of a true writer and also the reader being the most important for their opinions and comments thank you for those too! I hope your day is great.And your holidays even greater!
