2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
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7 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
This to me of Jesus Christ, the Savior of us all. We need to focus on this which he has done,not to just speak about it, but to live our lives to honor and use His gift respectfully.
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This to me of Jesus Christ, the Savior of us all. We need to focus on this which he has done,not to just speak about it, but to live our lives to honor and use His gift respectfully.
RJ
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You summed up Jesus's life in such an easy for all to understand. Yes, He came to save ALL of us. We were ALL made in the image of God. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem and the presentation.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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You summed up Jesus's life in such an easy for all to understand. Yes, He came to save ALL of us. We were ALL made in the image of God. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem and the presentation.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Beautiful Christmas poem. It summed up the meaning of His life. He loved unconditionally. He still does. We are the ones given the choice to accept and live Him back or not. We are the lucky ones to know Him. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Beautiful Christmas poem. It summed up the meaning of His life. He loved unconditionally. He still does. We are the ones given the choice to accept and live Him back or not. We are the lucky ones to know Him. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for remembering how much Christ suffered for all of us. Though none was worthy of His love and sacrifice, He forgave and made a way for salvation.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you for remembering how much Christ suffered for all of us. Though none was worthy of His love and sacrifice, He forgave and made a way for salvation.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 big sister
❤️ Marival
Comment from samandlancelot
Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
I enjoyed timely message about mercy and forgiveness through Jesus Christ and what He did for everyone on the cross.
Your picture is amazing and full of details.
the kindness (kindest) soul you could find,
and was hard to angered (perhaps 'slow to anger' or 'hard to make angry.' The tense doesn't work for 'angered').
no mattered what
they've (change 'they've' to 'they') had done
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
I enjoyed timely message about mercy and forgiveness through Jesus Christ and what He did for everyone on the cross.
Your picture is amazing and full of details.
the kindness (kindest) soul you could find,
and was hard to angered (perhaps 'slow to anger' or 'hard to make angry.' The tense doesn't work for 'angered').
no mattered what
they've (change 'they've' to 'they') had done
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Patricia, I appreciate your help, it means a lot to me.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
had no idea where this was going until "mother was a whore" and it started falling into place lol
a great spiritual journey
with thought-provoking well-written words flowing smoothly
one small typo/spag:
His Mother,
the kindness soul you could find -- i think you meant 'the KINDEST soul'
other than that, a great poem
and the picture is perfect!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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had no idea where this was going until "mother was a whore" and it started falling into place lol
a great spiritual journey
with thought-provoking well-written words flowing smoothly
one small typo/spag:
His Mother,
the kindness soul you could find -- i think you meant 'the KINDEST soul'
other than that, a great poem
and the picture is perfect!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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I was going to live up for interpretation but decided to make a reference.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review. The error is fixed, thanks!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautiful story, well-crafted in this free verse and recounting the life of Jesus and the love that wouldn't waver despite the hearts "filled with boulders" of those who tested Him. Re stanza 7: I would suggest the following:
"and was hard to (anger)/no (matter) what/(they'd) done.
Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Warm wishes Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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A beautiful story, well-crafted in this free verse and recounting the life of Jesus and the love that wouldn't waver despite the hearts "filled with boulders" of those who tested Him. Re stanza 7: I would suggest the following:
"and was hard to (anger)/no (matter) what/(they'd) done.
Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Warm wishes Debbie
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, a couple of people mentioned the errors and they are fixed now. Thank you!
Thank you very much for your exceptional review.
Gypsy 😊
