2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
OMG that is the cutest thing ever! The poem is adorable in its three lines but that animated cat has my heart lol those little paws sticking up in the air!! lol Thanks for the smiles.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
OMG that is the cutest thing ever! The poem is adorable in its three lines but that animated cat has my heart lol those little paws sticking up in the air!! lol Thanks for the smiles.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Hahaha... I'm so happy you like it.
Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Lune contest with us. I'm curious why the entry title isn't highlighted in blue like it usually is. Oh well, I did enjoy reading this entry and the presentation. Again, it's as usual, wonderful. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
Thank you for sharing this Lune contest with us. I'm curious why the entry title isn't highlighted in blue like it usually is. Oh well, I did enjoy reading this entry and the presentation. Again, it's as usual, wonderful. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
This is a lovely metaphor about fall. I like the way your poem is displayed.
An excellent sentori.
I hope you're having a nice day.
I'm ok, but I think I just saw the devil fly by in ice skates. Brr. I hate winter.
Have a blessed Christmas, Gypsy
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
Gypsy,
This is a lovely metaphor about fall. I like the way your poem is displayed.
An excellent sentori.
I hope you're having a nice day.
I'm ok, but I think I just saw the devil fly by in ice skates. Brr. I hate winter.
Have a blessed Christmas, Gypsy
Cindy
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome, Gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written lune with a good topic.
-Very good description of sunset,
and a very good concluding line.
-Yesterday at sunset, the sky was
a reddish pink behind our neighbor's house.
-It was gorgeous.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written lune with a good topic.
-Very good description of sunset,
and a very good concluding line.
-Yesterday at sunset, the sky was
a reddish pink behind our neighbor's house.
-It was gorgeous.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy. Happy Holidays to you, too.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed your lune poem for the 5-3-5 contest. Fields of grain in a stirring breeze does appear to be waving goodbye. This has awesome imagery and is beautifully illustrated.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
I enjoyed your lune poem for the 5-3-5 contest. Fields of grain in a stirring breeze does appear to be waving goodbye. This has awesome imagery and is beautifully illustrated.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is such a beautiful presentation for the contest. I think you have a winner here.loved it from my very first read. Good luck Gypsy, and have a great day.
RJ
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
This is such a beautiful presentation for the contest. I think you have a winner here.loved it from my very first read. Good luck Gypsy, and have a great day.
RJ
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Just love the artwork, I never really thought of the sunset as being as tangerine appearance, but I think you're right, I'll have to start seeing things in definitively colourful, even dreams, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
Just love the artwork, I never really thought of the sunset as being as tangerine appearance, but I think you're right, I'll have to start seeing things in definitively colourful, even dreams, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you
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Welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
excellent satori with the wheat fields waving goodbye in the cooling autumn breeze...
nice imagery of a tangerine sunset, too
smooth flow
no spag or typos
one thing - in your notes, you say it's for a contest... but i don't think it's entered in because there's no link for it - so you may want to check on that...
thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
excellent satori with the wheat fields waving goodbye in the cooling autumn breeze...
nice imagery of a tangerine sunset, too
smooth flow
no spag or typos
one thing - in your notes, you say it's for a contest... but i don't think it's entered in because there's no link for it - so you may want to check on that...
thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from DonandVicki
A lune that brings out feelings of late summer with the wheat fields ripe and the setting sun bringing on a cooler evening. The artwork complements your well-chosen words.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
A lune that brings out feelings of late summer with the wheat fields ripe and the setting sun bringing on a cooler evening. The artwork complements your well-chosen words.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely day and you also have a very good week and may God bless you with a very merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
This is a very nice LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely day and you also have a very good week and may God bless you with a very merry Christmas.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊