2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "The Circle of Life".
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this circle of life poem with us. I enjoyed reading. Our elderly have so much to teach, yet in our society they are often treated and 'worthless'. I hate that. Wonderful poem!!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this circle of life poem with us. I enjoyed reading. Our elderly have so much to teach, yet in our society they are often treated and 'worthless'. I hate that. Wonderful poem!!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, have a wonderful day.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
aw this was a good circle of life poem
i liked the "it goes on and go repetition
a simple little poem with a profound message
thought-provoking smooth flow and rhythm
no spag or typose
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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aw this was a good circle of life poem
i liked the "it goes on and go repetition
a simple little poem with a profound message
thought-provoking smooth flow and rhythm
no spag or typose
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, have a wonderful day.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
And life and nature are forever changing, as we are too, every cell in our bodies. Nothing is permanent which is what makes life so precious and beautiful. Thanks for sharing your lovely, introspective verse, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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And life and nature are forever changing, as we are too, every cell in our bodies. Nothing is permanent which is what makes life so precious and beautiful. Thanks for sharing your lovely, introspective verse, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, have a wonderful day.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is true about life today, we live on through our children. I am so happy to experience God's gift. Your words are beautiful and very heartwarming. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is true about life today, we live on through our children. I am so happy to experience God's gift. Your words are beautiful and very heartwarming. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, have a wonderful day.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
This is such an excellent take on the 'circle of life.'
Your whole presentation is colorful. I love the photo too.
Great free verse poem, Gypsy.
Good luck with your book.
Blessings,
Cindy
*im sorry for not being so active in my club; I get overwhelmed trying to make my other assignments and reviewing.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
This is such an excellent take on the 'circle of life.'
Your whole presentation is colorful. I love the photo too.
Great free verse poem, Gypsy.
Good luck with your book.
Blessings,
Cindy
*im sorry for not being so active in my club; I get overwhelmed trying to make my other assignments and reviewing.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Cindy, don't stress about clubs, there are not assignments, they are suppose to be fun. You can skip events, it's alright.
Thank you very much, have a wonderful day.
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you so much, Gypsy.😊
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, the Lord's giving never stops and He provides for all His children. I like your repetition of the word "new" because it reminds me of Revelation chapter 21 when God will make all things new!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Yes, the Lord's giving never stops and He provides for all His children. I like your repetition of the word "new" because it reminds me of Revelation chapter 21 when God will make all things new!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Yes, I thought about our gifts from God, including nature and all life. I say thank you every night.
Thank you, big sister.
Love,
Marival ❤️
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Comment from Lana Marie
Hmmm... this is very good. The circle of life that goes on and on and on and on. Yes god's Giving never stops. I love that line at the end. Thank you for sharing your creative writing.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hmmm... this is very good. The circle of life that goes on and on and on and on. Yes god's Giving never stops. I love that line at the end. Thank you for sharing your creative writing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, have a wonderful day.
Gypsy 😊
