Manitree
What would happen if....21 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another good Sci-Fi related poem. I like the theme and the image chosen liked these lines the best
Inside cocoons of churning wild growth comes the meld
Observe the birth of the impossible leafed, rooted babe
Never doubt the changeling of species where Manitree is born
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another good Sci-Fi related poem. I like the theme and the image chosen liked these lines the best
Inside cocoons of churning wild growth comes the meld
Observe the birth of the impossible leafed, rooted babe
Never doubt the changeling of species where Manitree is born
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This one's ups the ante of The Meld and makes it less speculative and more terrifyingly descriptive.
Even more amazing artwork you created to accentuate it all.
Good luck @ the polls with this entry. Xo
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This one's ups the ante of The Meld and makes it less speculative and more terrifyingly descriptive.
Even more amazing artwork you created to accentuate it all.
Good luck @ the polls with this entry. Xo
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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And she liked this one too.Thank you again your awesome rating and and your current comments.I'd just like to fall off my chair every time. Very happy that you enjoy them! I wish you and yours the most amazing holiday ever!
Comment from Jim Wile
That is so cool, Lea. What a unique description of how this odd species came into being. Evidently there was some disastrous upheaval and massive destruction, but life always seems to find a way to survive, even if it's with a strange new species. I loved that picture too. Really neat poem!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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That is so cool, Lea. What a unique description of how this odd species came into being. Evidently there was some disastrous upheaval and massive destruction, but life always seems to find a way to survive, even if it's with a strange new species. I loved that picture too. Really neat poem!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow Jim, i'm totally happy you like it! Any actually, why about the poem?And it's theme. I'm glad you're enjoying my artwork too. It was exactly the figure I pictured in my mind. Thank you, jim.May you and yours have the most many holiday and let the force be with you!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very interesting acrostic poem. It isn't the sort of word one usually sees used for this type of work. I love the artwork that you chose. It is very different from what I usually see on here. Great job!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This was a very interesting acrostic poem. It isn't the sort of word one usually sees used for this type of work. I love the artwork that you chose. It is very different from what I usually see on here. Great job!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thanks Monica! I appreciate that! I actually made that picture the other ones too. Really glad you like them most of all, I'm grateful for your time. I'm for you, review you're ready and your insightful comments! Have the best holiday. May the force be with you!
Comment from Sanku
Great effort ! The word mutation has bees described very well ,Since Change is the only constant ,we might as well be ready for Manitree.
I liked the expression'deviant soup'
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Great effort ! The word mutation has bees described very well ,Since Change is the only constant ,we might as well be ready for Manitree.
I liked the expression'deviant soup'
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow! So glad you enjoyed it thank you! Thank you for this Greek review. Your kind comments, awesome rating for most of all your time! Fastest that you liked it of which ISO appreciate. So I wish you and yours a happy holiday and that you're having a great night!
Comment from karenina
Wow! Like a fantasy/sci-fi experiment gone wrong, all presented within the Acrostic form!
Manitree. This is your creation?
I googled the word and guess what came up?
Your poem!
Did you know you are sharing your FanStory posts with the general public?
If so, great!
If not, you need to "opt out" of that by checking the appropriate box when you post!
Great image as well!
You give new meaning to finding our roots!
(smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Wow! Like a fantasy/sci-fi experiment gone wrong, all presented within the Acrostic form!
Manitree. This is your creation?
I googled the word and guess what came up?
Your poem!
Did you know you are sharing your FanStory posts with the general public?
If so, great!
If not, you need to "opt out" of that by checking the appropriate box when you post!
Great image as well!
You give new meaning to finding our roots!
(smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hello, thank you so much for coming in and reading and expressing yourself so well, and yes, I am all over the internet. Actually, you google my name Lea Tonin, there are pages and pages of stuff. I mean, because I have some books on this. Or a book on the shelf at the moment book, two coming along shortly.Alright, publish on multiple poetry sites as well. That's cool that it did that, though. Manitree is definitely my made up name for a new species, hybrid plant and human. Lol find our roots haha! Thank you for your great review, your time. And your awesome reading, I appreciate it very much. Hope you have a really great holiday with you and yours and an awesome night too!
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You definitely have a web footprint (and I don't mean like a duck)--
Good for you!
Sorry it's been so long between visits.
Life keeps interrupting!
:)
Comment from Ulla
This is a great acrostic, Lea, forming the word, mutation. I really liked it and you constructed a beautiful poem around the letters in the word. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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This is a great acrostic, Lea, forming the word, mutation. I really liked it and you constructed a beautiful poem around the letters in the word. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Ulla thanks so much! Best is that you like it?And that is my goal, my reader enjoys it! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and to comment and offer your great rating.All of which i'm grateful for. I wish you and yours a wonderful holiday and hope Santa brings you all you need and deserve. Thank you again.Have a great night!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Manitree - I like it. Great word. And great caricatures, quite lovely (she, mostly) smiley face here
This is quite creative. Terrific work.
And best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Manitree - I like it. Great word. And great caricatures, quite lovely (she, mostly) smiley face here
This is quite creative. Terrific work.
And best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thanks, wayne.I'm totally glad you like it! Bit of a spin from the usual butt, I always feel like experimenting! Thanks again, my friend. Hope you're doing well. And your family's good too chat soon!
Comment from Begin Again
You certainly took a dive off the cliff and let your mind develop a new life of sorts, and your chosen picture matches the words. I'm not very good at deciphering poems, but I believe I got the gist of this one and not only understood but enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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You certainly took a dive off the cliff and let your mind develop a new life of sorts, and your chosen picture matches the words. I'm not very good at deciphering poems, but I believe I got the gist of this one and not only understood but enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Carol. That's so awesome of you to say. I'm really glad you liked it. Truly, i'm always happy with readers like what I write.It encourages me to carry on. I am assuming you're a novel writer, or perhaps a script writer or a songwriter, I can sense from your writing that you certainly have a well spring all the information and words to choose from. Thank you again have an awesome night!
Comment from DonandVicki
This poem/acrostic does what all good poetry should do and that is fully engage the readers imagination. This brought out fantastical and vivid images fore.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This poem/acrostic does what all good poetry should do and that is fully engage the readers imagination. This brought out fantastical and vivid images fore.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm super happy you like this one. It's an experiment trying on a new species, just for fun. I appreciate your kind review.And your great rating in your time most of all, thank you so much for this. And I really hope that you have the best holiday in your day is going grand!