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Christmas Mouse

A short verse, for this season.

8 total reviews 
Comment from jmdg1954
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Quite the interesting take on a Christmas poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this story of the excited little mouse on the greatest day in history.

Easily read and presented.
Thank you.
John

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

Comment from Laurie Holding
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Just freaking adorable. Thank you for posting this sweet, short, beauty of a poem. You should do a whole series and make a chapbook out of it. Well done, and I wish you Merry Christmas.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

Comment from Brenda Strauser
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A very nice poem. It was clever to use a mouse at that time. Picture goes well with the mouse. Nice description of the birth of N Jesus as the mouse saw it.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

Comment from Tom Horonzy
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Every now and then an entry comes along that tickles The ivories like Liberace did On a keyboard
Well done
And a Merry Christmas, Happy New Year
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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for the 6 stars..truly appreciated
Comment from pome lover
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weeelll, that's a lovely thought, and a neat poem and I give you credit for both - which I am happy to do - I just have a thing about mice. I know they can't help being what they are, but that big picture didn't help.
I bet Mary probably didn't see him. :)
Katharine

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    I love your comments, thank you
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    I love your comments, thank you
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very sweet poem that goes well with the holiday of Christmas. You used great descriptive words and an adorable picture of the little mouse. Thank you for sharing. It made me and my heart smile. Even the smallest of creatures were made by God! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Many thanks for taking the time to review and comment.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Many thanks for taking the time to review and comment.
Comment from Trina Layne
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This little guy made me smile. A mouse's perspective on the Christmas story - thanks for presenting this idea. Congratulations on your piece. Keep writing!

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you, much appreciated.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you, much appreciated.
Comment from Angel Debbie
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You sure were a smart mouse to see and do all that stuff. Great little write. I thank you for sharing and the picture was a perfect pick. Have a great day!

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you Angela
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you Angela
reply by Angel Debbie on 18-Dec-2024
    Your welcome