Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Gypsy,
What a creepy, scary, macabre poem! I like this style. I won't feel safe in bed anymore. Does Krampus send bad dogs to hell? Just asking for Ruby's sake. *smile*
Great entry, Gypsy,
I was really creeped out!
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊 sorry, I love horror. I made some changes, hopefully is better.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....leave it to mankind to ruin a child's enjoyement by turning what should be a nice dream into a nightmare. Can't let kids have any nice thoughts

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool krampus poem
great imagery of yellow eyes in the corner of the room
and the sound of hooves on the flow like heartbeats
also like the claws dragging the bad ones to hell...
smooth flow throughout
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊 I made changes this morning, I hope it's better.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Excellent, Gypsy! You got your sharp teeth into this one and frightened those poor children to death..or hell. This is the second Krampus verse I've read so I'm now well acquainted with this folklore character, the antithesis to Santa. My favourite stanza was the fifth, that really depicted something from which Christmas goodwill would be in scant supply! Well done, Gypsy! Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊 I added the summarized story of Krampus.... it's terrifying. I made some changes this morning. I hope it's better.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 18-Dec-2024

I like it, Gypsy. But I actually prefer the original. It now seems, like a painting can become, a bit overworked. And I don't understand the word 'spected' Could this be an abbreviation of expected?

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024

Thank you, Debbie, I corrected 'expected"

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

Wow. Great job on this prompt, Gypsy. You really brought him to life and if anyone wasn't familiar with Krampus before reading your poem, they were completely educated after. Loved it.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊 I made some changes this morning. I hope it's better. Thank you for leadining the club, I'm enjoying it.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Marival, you still got it sweet girl...
Dean would be so proud of you...and what
a perrrfect club for you...

this poem is enough to make a grown man scream...
and the picture...speaks for itself...
really very well written you...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, Linda 😊 xoxox

Marival ❤️

reply by l.raven on 19-Dec-2024

always soooo welcome beautiful you...
love xxoo

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well I vaguely know something about Krampus but I think it was from Fanstory members I probably learned about him. I think I liked the way the movie Red One depicted Krampus. LoL.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

I haven't watched the movie yet.... I'll check it out.

This morning I changed it a little, I hope is better.

Love you, big sister ❤️