Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Gypsy,
This poem is really special to me. I live in an area where hunting is of paramount importance. (I don't like it myself, but rednecks need something to aim at. lol. )
Seriously, I'm feeling for the hapless rabbit in your poem!
Great addition to the Book of Renga,, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

Gypsy hugs

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Very nice follow up to the preceding Renga, I am anxious to see what cones next for bunny. Thank you for sharing this one with me. Hope you are having a great day. God blessings to you and your family.
RJ

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

great bunny haiku - sad... hopefully the "hunter" misses...
the third line is a sharp turn from the safe bunny hole
good juxtaposition with smooth transition
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I'm holding my breath too that he makes it. An evocative 5-7-5 suggesting that, maybe, there is something in the air like a change of season perhaps but, with it, a predator on the loose. A great addition to the book! Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊 have a lovely day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh-oh! Suddenly, bunny's safe home is no longer safe!! I hope the hunter is holding his breath because he can't shoot something so cute and will go get groceries instead.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival