BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "A Bit of Sunshine "Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Teri7
June, This is a really nice follow up with this 7/7 part. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery that goes well with your words. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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June, This is a really nice follow up with this 7/7 part. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery that goes well with your words. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful renga poem. It links well to previous 5-7-5 stanza. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you very much for participating in our renga book.
Gypsy
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Beautiful renga poem. It links well to previous 5-7-5 stanza. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you very much for participating in our renga book.
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
June,
This is a nice 7/7 story. I love the picture of the rabbit hanging out. My first thought was my Pit Bull Kratos would have a field day with it.
Well done
Cecilia
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June,
This is a nice 7/7 story. I love the picture of the rabbit hanging out. My first thought was my Pit Bull Kratos would have a field day with it.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, A Bit of Sunshine, has the proper formatting and sees the tunneling lepus laying out, while absorbing a little Vitamin D from the sun. Nice.
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This two-line poem, A Bit of Sunshine, has the proper formatting and sees the tunneling lepus laying out, while absorbing a little Vitamin D from the sun. Nice.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024