Authentic You
We all look different, embrace who you are.5 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, if we're lucky, we learn early in life that what we see is not always what the package offers. A slow learner, I finally found out the shell sometimes hides a monster within. Thanks for sharing.
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Yes, if we're lucky, we learn early in life that what we see is not always what the package offers. A slow learner, I finally found out the shell sometimes hides a monster within. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written poem that helped my spirits today. I am who God made me to be. I just try to do a better job the next day. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very nice and well written poem that helped my spirits today. I am who God made me to be. I just try to do a better job the next day. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from patricia dillon
You reflect the relationship we all have with the mirror until we finally come to the conclusion that authenticity is the most important thing. Very true.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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You reflect the relationship we all have with the mirror until we finally come to the conclusion that authenticity is the most important thing. Very true.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your great review and six stars! Yes, when it's all said and done being authentic and real is more satisfying than picking apart all of our physical flaws.
Comment from papa55mike
Some people don't like to look in a mirror, including me. I'm always afraid it will show the true me. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Some people don't like to look in a mirror, including me. I'm always afraid it will show the true me. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you Mike for reviewing. Yes, that mirror can boost or diminish our confidence sometimes.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great mirror poem. It is well organized and flows nicely. I like the fact the mirror didn't beat the image up. I know sometimes I don't like what I see. Where did my youth go?
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This is a great mirror poem. It is well organized and flows nicely. I like the fact the mirror didn't beat the image up. I know sometimes I don't like what I see. Where did my youth go?
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia for your review. Yes it is interesting how we feel when we look at ourselves in the mirror at times sometimes we feel good about it and other times not so much.
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You're welcome