Mirror's Image
Mirror Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Trina Layne
Nice work with your acrostic. Thanks for sharing this. As the years go by, the battles with the mirror have increased. I know that changes are par for the course. We all must learn to accept ourselves throughout the changing scenes of life. Best to you in the contest!
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Nice work with your acrostic. Thanks for sharing this. As the years go by, the battles with the mirror have increased. I know that changes are par for the course. We all must learn to accept ourselves throughout the changing scenes of life. Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
I think the wondrous thing about imperfection is that God love's the imperfection, He delights in offering the wonderful process of perfecting, and the joy thereof, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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I think the wondrous thing about imperfection is that God love's the imperfection, He delights in offering the wonderful process of perfecting, and the joy thereof, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from papa55mike
It all starts with the right attitude. Then, those wrinkles and bulges become lifelines and curves. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It all starts with the right attitude. Then, those wrinkles and bulges become lifelines and curves. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great acrostic mirror poem. It is well organized and flows quite nicely to completion. Yes, that good old mirror shows life on our face.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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This is a great acrostic mirror poem. It is well organized and flows quite nicely to completion. Yes, that good old mirror shows life on our face.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem is an excellent depiction of how we see ourselves in the mirror, capturing both the imperfections and the inherent beauty of our reflections. The use of the mirror as a metaphor to convey life's changes and the acceptance of self is beautifully executed. Here are a few suggestions to enhance the impact:
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Your poem is an excellent depiction of how we see ourselves in the mirror, capturing both the imperfections and the inherent beauty of our reflections. The use of the mirror as a metaphor to convey life's changes and the acceptance of self is beautifully executed. Here are a few suggestions to enhance the impact:
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024