We Are All Equal
My view in life.16 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It is nice to hear of someone who still believes. Yes, I know there are many but seemingly less today than past years. Churck lots are half full and where the networks carried services in the past they too are fewer.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
It is nice to hear of someone who still believes. Yes, I know there are many but seemingly less today than past years. Churck lots are half full and where the networks carried services in the past they too are fewer.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thank you, my friend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
You wrote a good story with a very good title. You begin it well describing your experience going to church and that your family was with you. You do a good job showing some of the things that are important to you, like your family and friends, and doing the right thing.
You also show the maturity that comes to most of us after we graduate from high school. Those years aren't easy, and as you said, it's not necessary to "dwell on the difficulties." Very good concluding lines about keeping positive memories, being thankful for what you have, and treating everyone equally. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
You wrote a good story with a very good title. You begin it well describing your experience going to church and that your family was with you. You do a good job showing some of the things that are important to you, like your family and friends, and doing the right thing.
You also show the maturity that comes to most of us after we graduate from high school. Those years aren't easy, and as you said, it's not necessary to "dwell on the difficulties." Very good concluding lines about keeping positive memories, being thankful for what you have, and treating everyone equally. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your well-written statement expresses a powerful message. As we mature, we discover we all want the same things...love, security, health, friendship, and to live in God's divine grace and mercy. We are equally loved by God. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
Your well-written statement expresses a powerful message. As we mature, we discover we all want the same things...love, security, health, friendship, and to live in God's divine grace and mercy. We are equally loved by God. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I have no idea how I can come up with a legal (150 characters) review for a short piece. Seems kike the review would be more than the post.
I'm happy that you seem to have live a life by the beatitudes.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
I have no idea how I can come up with a legal (150 characters) review for a short piece. Seems kike the review would be more than the post.
I'm happy that you seem to have live a life by the beatitudes.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you! I hope I win!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Raul, I'm really glad that you have found your true call in life and that it gives you peace. That is important and, if I may say so, the most important thing. You have found happiness. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
Hi Raul, I'm really glad that you have found your true call in life and that it gives you peace. That is important and, if I may say so, the most important thing. You have found happiness. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Raul.
I read your short autobiographical entry, and it occurs to me you have built your life on solid rock and not shifting sand. Congratulations upon your well written entry and I wish you very good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
Hello Raul.
I read your short autobiographical entry, and it occurs to me you have built your life on solid rock and not shifting sand. Congratulations upon your well written entry and I wish you very good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sanku
This is a very good write You have stated clearly your ideals and beliefs .You are self reliant , I have read most of your post though I might not write a review .You have improved a lot -a quantum jump. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
This is a very good write You have stated clearly your ideals and beliefs .You are self reliant , I have read most of your post though I might not write a review .You have improved a lot -a quantum jump. Congratulations!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from bob cullen
This truly deserved a six. Your final sentence sums up everything I've ever been taught, and all in so few words. It makes absolute sense. If everyone focused on positive memories this world would be a much healthier place.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
This truly deserved a six. Your final sentence sums up everything I've ever been taught, and all in so few words. It makes absolute sense. If everyone focused on positive memories this world would be a much healthier place.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, God loves us all equally, we are unique beings, there is only one of us that has ever been, and ever will be, no wonder there is no hiccup in the kingdom of God, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
Oh yes, God loves us all equally, we are unique beings, there is only one of us that has ever been, and ever will be, no wonder there is no hiccup in the kingdom of God, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
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Pleasure
Comment from karenina
You were raised with faith and values and you have never sacrificed them for profit or self-aggrandizing.
Equality seems to be a test humans keep failing.
We are all God's children and wouldn't it be great if we acted that way?
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
You were raised with faith and values and you have never sacrificed them for profit or self-aggrandizing.
Equality seems to be a test humans keep failing.
We are all God's children and wouldn't it be great if we acted that way?
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
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Bless you!