Hall of Mirrors
a mirror poem~a French Rondeau form8 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This mirrored hall poem, especially the final verse made me think of being trapped in a dream sequence and feeling pleased to finally wake up. I really enjoyed your French Rondeau, and wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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This mirrored hall poem, especially the final verse made me think of being trapped in a dream sequence and feeling pleased to finally wake up. I really enjoyed your French Rondeau, and wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Hello Valda... thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
This is a nicely done rondeau which can describe anyone's life. Life is a lot of different facets good and bad that we move through.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S Hope you and yours are happy and healthy.
I would like to let you know that I just published a book titled,
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is
available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the
bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon and
search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Hi Melissa,
This is a nicely done rondeau which can describe anyone's life. Life is a lot of different facets good and bad that we move through.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S Hope you and yours are happy and healthy.
I would like to let you know that I just published a book titled,
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is
available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the
bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon and
search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much Joan!! Hugs!
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You are most welcome, Melissa. Same to you.
Joan
Comment from Colorado Owl
I'm wondering if you meant to say "Fairway" places rather than "Faraway".
Do you enjoy paying golf? I suggest changing "the grotesque" by removing "the". Your words would have a better flow. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I'm wondering if you meant to say "Fairway" places rather than "Faraway".
Do you enjoy paying golf? I suggest changing "the grotesque" by removing "the". Your words would have a better flow. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thanks for your review and suggestions!!
Comment from Sally Law
This is a fabulous entry for the contest. The French Rondeau poetry form captures the feeling of a mirrored hall and the soul within. I will certainly be watching for the contest. My best wishes in the contest too.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This is a fabulous entry for the contest. The French Rondeau poetry form captures the feeling of a mirrored hall and the soul within. I will certainly be watching for the contest. My best wishes in the contest too.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much, sweet Sally!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever and talented write, love the sentiment and the inventive rhymes and good metre. A pleasure to read and worthy of six stars, good luck with the contest, this would be a worthy winner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This is a clever and talented write, love the sentiment and the inventive rhymes and good metre. A pleasure to read and worthy of six stars, good luck with the contest, this would be a worthy winner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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thanks so much, sweet Dolly.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great mirror poem. It flows nicely and is well organized. I like the line"uneven floors induce a fall" I think its funny when people get hurt. I'm a little twisted like that.
Well done and good in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This is a great mirror poem. It flows nicely and is well organized. I like the line"uneven floors induce a fall" I think its funny when people get hurt. I'm a little twisted like that.
Well done and good in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from royowen
To be caught in a place thst was hard to escape from would be incredibly difficult with mirrors al around, the one thing about staring at oneself, particularly if there were guilt feelings wouldn't be, being faced by one's own despised image would be tough, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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To be caught in a place thst was hard to escape from would be incredibly difficult with mirrors al around, the one thing about staring at oneself, particularly if there were guilt feelings wouldn't be, being faced by one's own despised image would be tough, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much Roy!!
Comment from Bryce 1
Life is confusing. I feel like this mirrored hall is where I go when I try to figure it out. If I can just let myself roll on down, then I feel like life won't have to be so confusing, mainly cus I'm not focused on figuring it out
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Life is confusing. I feel like this mirrored hall is where I go when I try to figure it out. If I can just let myself roll on down, then I feel like life won't have to be so confusing, mainly cus I'm not focused on figuring it out
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you for this insightful review. :)