Barefoot In The Rain
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Barefoot In The Rain Chap 4"An unexpected accident brings unexpected thoughts
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Comment from LJbutterfly
Sorry I'm missing some of your Christmas stories, and posts by others listed in my messages. Life is happening all around me. My daughter and her husband will arrive this coming Monday and spend the week.
Kendra did a wise thing accepting a date from a dating app., where you get to pick and choose before you actually date someone. I know some happy couples who met on the internet. I'm glad Kendra is enjoying herself while she waits to see what happens with Mr. Train Mystery Man.
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Sorry I'm missing some of your Christmas stories, and posts by others listed in my messages. Life is happening all around me. My daughter and her husband will arrive this coming Monday and spend the week.
Kendra did a wise thing accepting a date from a dating app., where you get to pick and choose before you actually date someone. I know some happy couples who met on the internet. I'm glad Kendra is enjoying herself while she waits to see what happens with Mr. Train Mystery Man.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good chapter. Things are suddenly moving rather fast with James. I hope he's a good match for Kendra. But since you're the author, I'll be ready for some twists and turns in this story. LOL! Blessings and merry Christmas! Carol
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Good chapter. Things are suddenly moving rather fast with James. I hope he's a good match for Kendra. But since you're the author, I'll be ready for some twists and turns in this story. LOL! Blessings and merry Christmas! Carol
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I've got to get back to that story because Eleanor is chomping at the bit for a story. Thanks so much for reading and enjoying this chapter.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm glad you're still writing this one. I thought maybe you'd abandoned it for the short Christmas stories. Smiles! Carol
Comment from royowen
Would you believe a book reading? I wonder? But I married out of my league, Elaine loved cricket which is what I was playing st the time, to my surprise so did she, but years later, she told me it was only for my sake she came to every game. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Would you believe a book reading? I wonder? But I married out of my league, Elaine loved cricket which is what I was playing st the time, to my surprise so did she, but years later, she told me it was only for my sake she came to every game. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thanks for enjoying another chapter, Roy. Hopefully I will get this finished soon. Appreciate the thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
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Most welcome
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, I have now read all the chapters, catching up with the story. She's still hoping against hope to seeing the man on the train. Well she did see him at the hospital when a woman picked him up.
Now, Kendra has met James on a blind date and has agreed to meeting up with him again. Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Hi Carol, I have now read all the chapters, catching up with the story. She's still hoping against hope to seeing the man on the train. Well she did see him at the hospital when a woman picked him up.
Now, Kendra has met James on a blind date and has agreed to meeting up with him again. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Go, Ulla! Glad you are caught up. Now if I can ever concentrate on the story instead of all the Christmas ones, I might get it finished. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, is it a step in the right or wrong direction? LOL. I don't guess they ever know until they are three-feet deep in quicksand and sinking fast.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Well, is it a step in the right or wrong direction? LOL. I don't guess they ever know until they are three-feet deep in quicksand and sinking fast.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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This girl is so far behind on answering review that it's crazy. Every day is getting busier and busier, yet I want to write ...which means reading and reviewing too. Thanks as always for being there to support me and to enjoy my efforts. I so appreciate it always.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh. Well!
Wasn't I all wondering how she could possibly "cheat" on Mr. No name on the train with a flesh and blood intelligent man with TICKETS to a book reading?
It's a bad virus I picked up reading Charleston novels back in the horse and buggy days...
(smile)
What are you cooking up in that clever mind of yours?
I surrender!
I'm enjoying it.
Your descriptive writing always impresses.
And I've run out of chapters...
I'm like putty in your hands!
Wherever are you taking me?
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Oh. Well!
Wasn't I all wondering how she could possibly "cheat" on Mr. No name on the train with a flesh and blood intelligent man with TICKETS to a book reading?
It's a bad virus I picked up reading Charleston novels back in the horse and buggy days...
(smile)
What are you cooking up in that clever mind of yours?
I surrender!
I'm enjoying it.
Your descriptive writing always impresses.
And I've run out of chapters...
I'm like putty in your hands!
Wherever are you taking me?
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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I'm not exactly sure where this story is going myself...too busy trying to deal with real life here and write the Christmas stories which make me happy. Thanks again, my love.
Smiles, Carol
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Are you getting ready to head down south? It must be soon! Safe travels!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is amazing. She actually accepted a date and an additional one with someone who wasn't the guy on the train. Maybe she isn't so obsessed with the guy on the train after all. Good for her.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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This is amazing. She actually accepted a date and an additional one with someone who wasn't the guy on the train. Maybe she isn't so obsessed with the guy on the train after all. Good for her.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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I'm not sure where this story is headed but I'm giving it a shot. Glad you are enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Well, this does sound promising. A good relationship should be based on an ever-deepening friendship, more than on looks and a spark,as that could be simply infatuation. Now, which way will she go?
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Well, this does sound promising. A good relationship should be based on an ever-deepening friendship, more than on looks and a spark,as that could be simply infatuation. Now, which way will she go?
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for your kindness and for enjoying the story. I truly appreciate it. May the season bless you and shower you with happiness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do like this story and can't wait to read more. You're keeping us in suspense.
James smiled as he responded to her. "Thought I was being safe." (her,)
She chuckled, "Maybe, but it looks like you'd be making both sides mad at you. It's an either-or kind of thing." (chuckled.)
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I do like this story and can't wait to read more. You're keeping us in suspense.
James smiled as he responded to her. "Thought I was being safe." (her,)
She chuckled, "Maybe, but it looks like you'd be making both sides mad at you. It's an either-or kind of thing." (chuckled.)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Carol dear,
This is so great! I go on a mini-honeymoon, and you crank out four chapters! Good heavens, my friend! How do you do it? I must backtrack now and get the bigger picture of Kendra and James.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Carol dear,
This is so great! I go on a mini-honeymoon, and you crank out four chapters! Good heavens, my friend! How do you do it? I must backtrack now and get the bigger picture of Kendra and James.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Oh a mini-honeymoon! Outstanding! I hope you had a marvelous time...how dumb of me...of course you did!!!! I've been on a writing frenzy but I have had fun. Thanks so much Sally..
Smiles, Carol