Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Christmas Flash story you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words about Santa and Rudolph the reindeer. You used great imagery also. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024

Thank you very much!

Comment from Avery Daniel

Good

Some of this vocabulary is likely too difficult for children, but the story was really good! I don't mean to act like I know better, but there were several examples in which I thought your vocabulary needed to be more... adjusted for youth. The word "resonate" likely won't be in a young child's vocabulary.

I also think you should revise the "needy children" bit... has bad undertones.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Thanks!

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Thanks!

reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

I changed it to general fiction instead of children.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Such a fun little 'take off' on the children-favorite, Rudolph! ;) Could easily be split and turned into a children's book... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Thank you so much!