Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I like how your poem talks about the struggles we face together. I like how you use repetition with "COVID-19". I especially like how you end on a hopeful note. Your message of standing together and fighting through is wonderful. Keep going, this was a great piece!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
Comment from
Peter Jarvis
This poem powerfully captures the ongoing struggle and resilience in the face of the COVID-19 pandemic. It conveys a mix of emotions--fear, loss, hope, and unity--reflecting the diverse experiences people have had during these challenging times. The refrain emphasises the importance of coming together, highlighting a spirit of perseverance and the belief that humanity can overcome adversity.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
reply by Peter Jarvis on 15-Dec-2024