Comment from
Julie Helms
What an awesome, ORIGINAL, take on the prompt! Took me a minute to see the connection but then I saw your cleverness!
I hope, in voting, people will pause to think it through.
Great job!
Julie
:-)
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem really struck me with its straightforward honesty. I loved the repetition of "I never was an oil painting". I could feel the freedom in those pounding footsteps. Your words flow so well - I truly enjoyed this!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024