BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Cheerful Bumble Bee"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
7 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....another potential for disaster along with climate change, both problems are being ignored by the right wing. The bees are disappearing
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....another potential for disaster along with climate change, both problems are being ignored by the right wing. The bees are disappearing
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love bees! And this renga verse is utterly charming with it's appropriate 'B' alliteration. Beautifully presented and fun and uplifting to read. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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I love bees! And this renga verse is utterly charming with it's appropriate 'B' alliteration. Beautifully presented and fun and uplifting to read. Well done, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I am fascinated by the bumble bee, I have spent more than my fair share of time, just looking at them. We can certainly learn a thing or two from these resourceful and industrious creatures, Nicely presented Renga.
RJ
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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I am fascinated by the bumble bee, I have spent more than my fair share of time, just looking at them. We can certainly learn a thing or two from these resourceful and industrious creatures, Nicely presented Renga.
RJ
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
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You're Welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
Fun use of alliteration in your 7-7 poem here. I do appreciate the bumble bees and the honeybees. They help ensure that we have food to eat! A fun thought of spring here.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Fun use of alliteration in your 7-7 poem here. I do appreciate the bumble bees and the honeybees. They help ensure that we have food to eat! A fun thought of spring here.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Ulla
Aw, that's just so lovely, Marival the visual and audio images are wonderful. I absolutely loved it. I think I have to add to the renga. Un abrazo mi amiga, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Aw, that's just so lovely, Marival the visual and audio images are wonderful. I absolutely loved it. I think I have to add to the renga. Un abrazo mi amiga, Ulla xx
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. I hope you add to the renga book. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
sweet honey d r i p s . . .
from the full hive---
busy bees buzzing
i love bees... they are so cool!
a great 2-line addition to the book!
good imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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sweet honey d r i p s . . .
from the full hive---
busy bees buzzing
i love bees... they are so cool!
a great 2-line addition to the book!
good imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your kind review. Happy holidays!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
One wonders how on earth bees manage to not get stuck in very sticky substances, and spiders? I have heard they are very adept at knowing how to keep out of getting stuck in their own webs, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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One wonders how on earth bees manage to not get stuck in very sticky substances, and spiders? I have heard they are very adept at knowing how to keep out of getting stuck in their own webs, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you
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