Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice Christmas story that made me think back to when I was a young girl and we would wait up for Santa and leave cookies and milk too. Of course I mom would make us go to bed so Santa could finally come! You used great descriptive words and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024

Happy the story brough pleasant memories. Thanks for the read and review.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Your story brought back memories of Christmases long past when we, as kids, prepared a feast for Santa. I like how you used mostly dialogue to tell your story and characterize the two children. Rod

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Thanks for the read and the encouraging review. So pleased, the story brought back pleasant memories.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You describe a joyous Christmas Eve and Christmas morning here and I have always enjoyed the excitement of Christmas, the anticipation, and the presents that are delivered by Santa. A fine memory here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Thanks for the read and the encouraging review. So pleased, the story brought back pleasant memories.xxx