For Cringiest Sweater in Town.
the title'goes to ...yikes....3 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
I looovve this take on Trump. This is a great view of him. A stark reminder that for the next four years, I have to consider him as being America's boss.
Good luck with this one, Franca!
Wishing you the best,
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Author,
I looovve this take on Trump. This is a great view of him. A stark reminder that for the next four years, I have to consider him as being America's boss.
Good luck with this one, Franca!
Wishing you the best,
Cindy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Glad you found the read delightful, I tried to make it spicy and funny.
Not even if they paid me would I wear it.
Thank you for the extra star! Much appreciated!
When you have time check you PM , I sent you a post several days ago.
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem is a humorous and playful take on the classic ugly Christmas sweater theme. It captures the spirit of fun and light-heartedness that such contests are all about.
Strengths:
- **Humour*: The playful jabs and witty lines make it entertaining and engaging.
- **Repetition**: The repeated lines create a catchy rhythm and highlight the central theme
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- **Imagery**: The vivid descriptions, like "fake biceps for a cupcake," paint a clear and amusing picture.
Your poem is fun and engaging. Keep up the great work, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Your poem is a humorous and playful take on the classic ugly Christmas sweater theme. It captures the spirit of fun and light-heartedness that such contests are all about.
Strengths:
- **Humour*: The playful jabs and witty lines make it entertaining and engaging.
- **Repetition**: The repeated lines create a catchy rhythm and highlight the central theme
.
- **Imagery**: The vivid descriptions, like "fake biceps for a cupcake," paint a clear and amusing picture.
Your poem is fun and engaging. Keep up the great work, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I"m glad you enjoyed my poem. And I appreciate the detailed review!
I tried to make it fun and add as much spice and rhyme as I could.
I added a video after where the word CUPCAKE is used.
I know Americans and English interpret the word in a different way.
In America, it's an insult (which was my intent), in Great Britain it's a term of endearment. like a cutie pie.
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I live and learn!
Take care.
Comment from Alicia johnston
This poem is a masterpiece of absurdity, perfectly capturing the essence of holiday cheer... if that cheer came with a side of awkward self-aggrandizement. The repetition of the sweater's "crown" status made me wonder: Is this a Christmas garment or the next heir to the British throne?
The second stanza shines with biting commentary, comparing a sweater to a "true cringeworthy stamp." Bold move, taking aim at both politics and questionable fashion choices. Bonus points for the "fake biceps for a cupcake" line, which left me picturing a protein shake enthusiast proudly lifting dessert.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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This poem is a masterpiece of absurdity, perfectly capturing the essence of holiday cheer... if that cheer came with a side of awkward self-aggrandizement. The repetition of the sweater's "crown" status made me wonder: Is this a Christmas garment or the next heir to the British throne?
The second stanza shines with biting commentary, comparing a sweater to a "true cringeworthy stamp." Bold move, taking aim at both politics and questionable fashion choices. Bonus points for the "fake biceps for a cupcake" line, which left me picturing a protein shake enthusiast proudly lifting dessert.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
I added the meaning of cupcake after reading your review.
You are not American, right?
I heard the term the first time in Star Trek 2009 it is an insult in America apparently.
One might say it to a guy who acts tough but is most probably just wind when put to the test.
If you have time check out the video I provided now.
Cupcake for the English is instead a term of endearment, like cutie-pie.a cute way to describe a sweet, sensitive person.
I think that is how you saw it rather than an insult. am I right?