Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
What a great surprise 80 word story. I bet little Johnny got quite the shock when he looked in dad's stocking. That's what he gets. The story Flows nicely and the story has an upbeat flow.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
Comment from
Beejay
That definitely was a surprise, I would never have guessed what Johnny was going to find in his Dad's stocking. Very clever, and a great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024