Christmas Mayhem
A merry mayhem story5 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This was a great Christmas mayhem story. The old man just couldn't get a break no matter how careful he was. Mayhem surely found him. This story flows nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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This was a great Christmas mayhem story. The old man just couldn't get a break no matter how careful he was. Mayhem surely found him. This story flows nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much, Cecilia, for your high praise of my story.
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You're welcome. Your story was great I hope you win.
Cecilia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed reading your story! I especially loved the part with Chester trying to hang the lights and how his grandson caused his fall. So funny! Your writing captures the humor and warmth of family perfectly. It's a delightful tale that makes me think of my own holiday memories. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I really enjoyed reading your story! I especially loved the part with Chester trying to hang the lights and how his grandson caused his fall. So funny! Your writing captures the humor and warmth of family perfectly. It's a delightful tale that makes me think of my own holiday memories. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I am very pleased you enjoyed my story, Michael, and found it amusing. Glad it could bring back memories.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is a well written tale around several Christmas occasions. It has a distinct modern feel to it, where the dad or granddad or man, is the butt of the joke in every scene. This should be very appealing to the FanStory demographic. Good work.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hmm, this is a well written tale around several Christmas occasions. It has a distinct modern feel to it, where the dad or granddad or man, is the butt of the joke in every scene. This should be very appealing to the FanStory demographic. Good work.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, lancellot.
Comment from zanya
A really enjoyable read with a sense of mayhem at its core but with a wonderful humorous touch in keeping with the holiday season - flows smoothly! Great pic and good dialogue
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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A really enjoyable read with a sense of mayhem at its core but with a wonderful humorous touch in keeping with the holiday season - flows smoothly! Great pic and good dialogue
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much, zanya, for this wonderful review of my story.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I am glad that Chester has survived one Christmas so far, your story has wonderful descriptions, and ends with a family that loves one another and can smile at little mishaps, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Excellent, I am glad that Chester has survived one Christmas so far, your story has wonderful descriptions, and ends with a family that loves one another and can smile at little mishaps, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, kahpot, for your encouraging praise.