BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Flower of the Heart"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice chapter for our Renga Book. Thank you for participating.
Good syllables count and connections between lines that is a good link to the previous stanza.
Beautiful presentation and word imagery.
Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Nice chapter for our Renga Book. Thank you for participating.
Good syllables count and connections between lines that is a good link to the previous stanza.
Beautiful presentation and word imagery.
Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, much appreciated.
RJ
Comment from June Sargent
This is a great follow up to my post in the book of renga! Tour poem picked up in the cherry blossoms and now the connection is changing into spring. I love this!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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This is a great follow up to my post in the book of renga! Tour poem picked up in the cherry blossoms and now the connection is changing into spring. I love this!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much.
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad you joined in this Renga book that Gypsy started. She had transitioned the book to spring themes and haiku poems are often about cherry blossoms which "warm our hearts" with the thoughts of love's return.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I'm so glad you joined in this Renga book that Gypsy started. She had transitioned the book to spring themes and haiku poems are often about cherry blossoms which "warm our hearts" with the thoughts of love's return.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much, I am happy to be part of Gypsy's creation, it is an excellent and creative idea brought to life.
RJ
Comment from Trina Layne
Sweet, RJ! This was another pleasant read and my emotions get a nice, gentle tug from this piece - springtime feelings. Congratulations on your writing!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Sweet, RJ! This was another pleasant read and my emotions get a nice, gentle tug from this piece - springtime feelings. Congratulations on your writing!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much.
RJ
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
RJ,
This is an awesome 5-7-5 poem. The warmth of the cherry blossoms brings out love and hope. Seeing the cherry blossoms in spring brings hope for renewal and warmer weather'
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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RJ,
This is an awesome 5-7-5 poem. The warmth of the cherry blossoms brings out love and hope. Seeing the cherry blossoms in spring brings hope for renewal and warmer weather'
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much.
RJ
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Nicely done 5-7-5 Renga poem. Simple but effective images. Very romantic feeling. Thank you for sharing. Hope you're doing ok Have a great day.....
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Nicely done 5-7-5 Renga poem. Simple but effective images. Very romantic feeling. Thank you for sharing. Hope you're doing ok Have a great day.....
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. Hope you are well.
RJ
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written chapter for the book and I very much enjoyed listening. It flows very well when it is red and loud and I wish you the very best. May you have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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This is a very well written chapter for the book and I very much enjoyed listening. It flows very well when it is red and loud and I wish you the very best. May you have a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank-you so much. May you and your family enjoy the season.
RJ